90% of this story is to my liking except for the MC name and few other things. But the rest so far I like and I like how the author mixes ideas or technology into the cultivation world without making it all about the technology but focusing on the cultivation world. A few writers make the mistake of writing a story about magic and they introduce magical guns which is fine but not if the main weapon is a magical gun. When I read a story the main focus should be on magic or cultivation if the story is about that or at least give a warning. There should be a balance when you mix things like magic and technology that one does not become too overpowered. Unless it a  magical world where magic has an advantage or in a world where there is not much magic and technology has the upper hand. Overall so far great story Keep it up.    

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