By Snusmumriken
Erf paid the price for his power, even if it was too much. He received a boon, even if it was too great. And now he needs to survive in an alien world while ensuring the safety of his estranged family. As the world will push him deeper and deeper
This story started out well, The author did a good job setting up the characters and teasing out bits of world building that kept me interested and hungry for more information. Unfortunately as the story progress the smut part takes center stage and it goes from a decently written story to an average smut, Eventually ending up being a terrible smut. As soon as Grud gets a wife, the writing progressively devolves into a fantasy smut non-sense with the last few chapters as just pure smut that has gotten so unrealistic its seems cartoonish.
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There's a good story here that's being held back by excessive, low quality smut although this aspect has improved in recent chapters (more plot, less smut). It's easy enough to just skim through the smut once it starts to get repetitive though and you won't miss much and eventually you'll be left with a decently interesting adventure story.
What makes the s*x scenes so bad is
the author has an extremely bizarre conception of anatomy.
If you told me this author had never seen a penis, I would believe that.
At the same time, if you told me this author had never seen a vagina I would believe that too.
This leaves me very confused about who actually wrote this.
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A very good story, and despite a lot of obscenity, it is beautiful for people who like this type of story. I especially liked how the hero's strength develops. I liked his ability, and finally, I liked this ancient world.
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This story has potential to be so much better if the author could stop being so horny and actually progress the plot. Soo many chapters are just smut.
We get it already, the guy has a big d*ck and balls.
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The first few chapters were pretty good, but once s*x gets involved with the story, it all goes downhill, there's more smut than actual story, which is a shame because the worldbuilding is nicely done and the concept of someone living through all ages is damn interesting, it's just that progression is too damn slow because there's s*x every f**king instant, and of course you can't get any scene without a reminder of "muh balls are too full, need to empty them into the 7/8 soulless c**dumps" I was genuinely hyped by the premise but everything said above made me drop this.
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