Hello writing this review a bit early so wont talk to much on the story other then how I think the basic set up of the story is but first lets talk grammar and spelling. I have not noticed any real spelling errors but that could just be me as for grammar all the sentences are worded in a way that makes sense and is easy and fluid to read. now for how I feel the story set up is. its like most reincarnated since birth story's in that the MC gets an early lead but unlike a lot of storys where the MC is completely competent right off the bat (which is a bit boring to me) she is strong (i think? spoiler for just ch 1 but she can regrow peoples limbs which I think implies she is strong) but she is also nerves and has her own anxiety's about her situation and is struggling to figure out how to go foreword. like yes it would be easy for her to just say hey dad I have magic and can help. and yes as someone who read dc she should know batman is a good person. but she will also know how extremally paranoid good old Bruce is about anyone with any form of powers so it would make sense that she would not out right be comfterble telling him. so so far has a solid start and people in it feel real and not like caricatures of them selves like in a lot of fanfics.... and some actual comics so I would give it an a+ in how the story has started

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Meliodas300

Status: 8. white-witch batgirl

Apr 21, 2023

Really cool story. We could get kinda a behind the scenes in the bat family, maybe even justice league and the titans.

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