I killed them all. Everyone who was responsible for my death.
I know I'm supposed to go to hell. I even saw the gates opening up for me. So why am I in a Prison truck headed for Belle Reve? Why does the girl on the cell next to me sound like Harley Quinn? why are there guards? And is that Killer Croc?
Why do I feel like the butt of a joke?
Finally, why do they all seem to think I killed Commissioner Gordon.
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ALTERNATIVE SYNOPSIS:
Davian just got out of prison after serving 5 years.
He decides to turn his life around and leaves his criminal life and his former gang behind, on the urging of his best friend. However, the streets are ruthless and in order to make sure Davian never snitches to the cops, his former gang tries to kill him.
He survives but his best friend is caught in the crossfire and dies. Feeling guilt and anger, he takes his revenge on his former friends, Killing them all but dying in the process.
He knows he's headed for hell but something pulls his soul away from the gates of hell and he finds himself in the DC multiverse.
The body he has occupied however has its own problems. It possesses a power that grants him the abilities of an Arrancar/Soul Reaper but messes with his mind.
Batman is after him because he killed Commissioner Gordon.
Read on as Davian navigates this new world and grows in power.
It is alright. Not bad, not good.
The plot is a convoluted mess, there is no rhyme or reason so far to explain what is even going on.
The power scaling is out of whack, can't even get my head wrap around it.
The fan service and wish fulfillment part is too much for my liking and it is too on the nose without much in story logic or reasoning (at least that I'm aware of).
The characters introduction are bloated, too many people being shove in and the MC being a passively plot driven so far (if there is even any plot, I can't see it). So yea if you have a casual knowledge about DC like me then reading this one is a pain to do.
The story so far is not intriguing and that is why I stop reading it at this chapter.
Overall, it is alright if you have extensive knowledge on DC lores and don't mind a lot of inconsistency.
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Good quality. MC has the potential to be a heavy hitter but not there from the get go. So far author is meshing bleach powers with DC universe that doesn't feel forced or with a skewed power balance.
My only complaint is finding this while the chapters number so few...
Fingers crossed for MC x Raven if there will be any romance, but there is no romance tag so..
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I've read up to chapter 8, really liking how its turning out good grammar, keeps me interested and Bleach so thats cool. Just hope author keeps making chapters Im already loving the story
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If I had one penny for every fanfic of an MC with Bleach powers in the D.C. Universe i've read, I would have two pennies, which isn't much but its weird that it happened twice.
What a combo man, I mean why? I mean it really does matches well, but how do you even get to that conclusion?
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