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I don't think the story is bad at all, skipped ahead to see the general outline of the story which seemed fine but the glaring hole is the grammar and structure single sentence statements over and over. The combo makes it hard to digest. I think the first thing author could work on is instead of MC talked to person or MC talked to his girls show those conversations don't just say those conversations happened actually write it out. Best of luck would love to see later down the road a rewrite because I could absolutely see improvement in writing in most current chapters.
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Good idea, solid execution, and as weird as it is to say about a magic apocalypse with systems: very down to earth.
MC is cautious, calm, and collected, with little reliance on plot armor. And MC shares powerups with the harem equally, which I really love to see.
I enjoyed it, but it does not really match my tastes enough to go past chapter 190 for me.
I like a little hot bloodedness in romance, and that is rare to find here. And while the relationship is there, its missing some tender 'romantic' moments. Also, I would say it isn't really smut, s*x scenes are rare and not really described in detail after the first.
Additionally, I like a more clear-cut power system, but after 190 chapters I have no idea who or what the MC can take in a fight.
So, good story, give it a try if you like down to earth adventure/survival in a magical apocalypse
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I will be sincere in the respective to this novel, although it is true that the writing style is not the best and that I wish there were many more conversations, the story itself compensates, I'll explain myself, I have read dozens of novels whether fics, books, western novels, Japanese, etc. And after reading this story I must recognize that the author is very good in this sense, so I send a big greeting to the author and encourage him to continue writing this wonderful story.
While it is true that many criticize it, you should not be discouraged, because from my point of view, those people do not value the effort behind each chapter, so I encourage you to ignore those people and move on, you may at times want to stop writing, but you must remember that there will always be people like me who like your story and who are willing to read new chapters, a greeting and cheer up.
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The summary of the story sounds nice and appealing. The execution on the other hand is poor. I don't believe that the author is a native English speaker. When reading this, many of the sentences are incomplete and for me it really disrupts anything the author tries to covey about the story. I read some of the ore recent chapters and there has been improvement in the author's writing but there is enough inconsistencies that take me out of the story. This feels more like machine translation than just playing writing in english.
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Really wanted to like this, hoping it would improve but the one line sentences with multiple lines between make it hard to read. The big issue is the fact it reads like a bunch of facts strung together, MC did this, got this, talked to this person, no emotion or emotional context.
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