It might be a good story, I don't know. I tend to listen to my web novels while I go about doing other things and there is one terribly annoying thing the author does that I just can't be bothered to listen to any more. The author has a bad habit of labeling every single sentence that was spoken out loud with the character speaking it. It's almost insulting to the reader like I can't understand a simple back and forth between two characters.
So, let me be the first to review this cause how dare no one else does. Paytoechip strikes us again with another wholesome and silly fluff fic that's enjoyable to read. If you've read "I was Betrayed then Reincarnated as a Kitsune" you already know what to expect albeit obviously a new story and a new protagonist. It's cute, it's fluffy, and it's wholesome. It's not a literary masterpiece to shake the ages, but it is a warm story that will leave you smiling. And sometimes that's all you need.
A reupload of the Agatha Loop, with significant fixes.
They asked Amber to become a magical girl three times.
She refused.
That only made her more interesting.
The fourth time, she asked them.
What to expect:
Oriel is the princess of a northern kingdom. She felt suffocated in the big palace surrounded by quirky characters and always daydreamed about living a different life.
Her wish might have been granted in the form of a kidnapping, and now she
It might be a good story, I don't know. I tend to listen to my web novels while I go about doing other things and there is one terribly annoying thing the author does that I just can't be bothered to listen to any more. The author has a bad habit of labeling every single sentence that was spoken out loud with the character speaking it. It's almost insulting to the reader like I can't understand a simple back and forth between two characters.
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So, let me be the first to review this cause how dare no one else does. Paytoechip strikes us again with another wholesome and silly fluff fic that's enjoyable to read. If you've read "I was Betrayed then Reincarnated as a Kitsune" you already know what to expect albeit obviously a new story and a new protagonist. It's cute, it's fluffy, and it's wholesome. It's not a literary masterpiece to shake the ages, but it is a warm story that will leave you smiling. And sometimes that's all you need.
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I'm not the best with words but Patyo's storytelling always brings a smile to my face so I am always looking forward to more chapters
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