By Simple_Russian_Boi
Danil met an early end. Death at fourteen from heatstroke is not the best thing that could happen to him, but someone intervened. Someone powerfull, someone dark. The Wanderer found a huge potential for magic in his soul, and like an interested ch
nice story.
okey MC with very little flaw
most of the characters acts as they should.
romance is sometimes cringy.
almost no plot hole.
MC actally smart.
overall better than 96.765% of naruto ff out there.
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i liked how the story doesn't 1 to 1 to according to the original plot (how after the giant sword mist guys defeat -i forgot his name-) there are new enemies. The world feels alive actions have consequences good or bad for kou. Only part I didn't like is mc's hate for the "useless" characters mainly Sakura we know she is useless but it is reminded like 20 time. Overall great story would love to see what happens next. ≪3
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My luck lately has honestly been scaring me. This is like, the fifth fanfic today that I've found that is actually good. For all of its flaws, I'd say it's pretty clear that the author has things planned out and isn't just coming up with things as they move along. I mean, I guess that's not too surprising once you stop to consider the fact that Sasuke is killed off within the first sentence. If my severely lacking knowledge of Naruto is up to code, that's a pretty big deal.
(Before anyone says that this is a spoiler, I was not exaggerating. Sasuke is proclaimed dead within the first paragraph of the first chapter, and I'm pretty sure it was the first sentence.)
Addendum: If there is one complaint I could possibly have with this story, it'd be that I'm left wanting more after-story content. One chapter is far from enough to satiate me.
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Likeable story
The only thing I dont like about MC is that he judge people based on what they did in anime or manga
He should judge people based on what they did now that MC exist as distruptor
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First few chapters in, gotta say, pretty good. Will come back later to edit when nec
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What I can say about this title? In one word: Amazing!
Great story, you will understand once you read the very first chapter. Lots of characters behaving in realistic way with plot deviating way further from original Naruto. And you wouldn't believe in what happened to Danzo. Yeah, blame Danzo forever. That was a genius move.
Nice action story with cringe romance (what romance isn't cringe worthy in real life?), witty MC with his comedy. Naruto being little different of original.
Plus the wholesome ending. That is a nice ending author did, no need to write a grand ending or anything of sort. Just make a deserving ending and it fits like a glove since some characters really deserve it.
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Great story! From beginning to end--the action was well crafted and I loved the character development of Koushin from beginning to end. He could be a 'little' over the top-- but that's all a part of his charm! 5 stars work!!!
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