It's alright. It's an interesting premise kinda weird though. The way they merge is a little goofy, it was phrased like a merge and since their the same person he has a similar personality. But the way the author goes about it later is like "wow your feelings for your family are so strong so now I am convinces to take care of them" which is a odd way to phrase that and not realistic, since the personality that was there originally committed suicide, so the feeling to take care of the family would come secondary to the depression that should have also carried over. 

Also they have money trouble and his solution to that is to start a business with the help of his system but he doesn't have a plan for the business and seems to think the system will carry him. Which might be true but it would be lame if it was. Also when he goes to his wife saying I'm going to quit my job to start a business she just agrees! To the person who was neglecting her and getting drunk and spending all their money on alcohol like a day ago! That's crazy and she doesn't even question it either. 

The Grammer is not perfect but readable.

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This work leave me itching. Too little description. Too little words per chapter. Too little something going on. Slice of Life without progress that a day can span around several chapters. It's irritating. Also, the s*x scene was... Kinda bland? I suggest searching R-18 in Literotica or AO3 for reference before creating smut chapters. 

It's irritating read for someone who doesn't live I Philippines like myself. Those who know not neither the culture nor architecture. I literally can't picture what happened within the chapters. It's just dialogue after dialogue of faceless people in endless white space. 

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