There aren't any excessive and ridiculous intra-battle dialogues. This author understands. The girl loves to demoralize her enemies, as all people should. Grammar & spelling are fine. Let the heads roll and the chaos ensue.

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Anastacius

Status: chapter 17: seconden event

Apr 22, 2023

There is little to no error on the grammar and the story is very interesting, the MC is badass, this is the type of novel I would like to see more on scribblehub, I've read many that is similar to this one, by similar I mean, vrmmo games with a strong MC, but no matter how many I've read, I neber get tired of it, looking forward to more chapters, tho I do say that sometimes a chapter ends with a cliffhange-

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LilBreh

Status: cdunno

Apr 9, 2023

It's not bad, but it felt very slice of life-y when I read it. Or very clean, censored, unrealistic, like a japanese novel. Whether it's the MC or the cliche, generic side characters, it feels like I could have watched almost any isekai anime and gotten the exact same experience. It doesn't scratch my itch.

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AsadaUni

Status: chapter 19: post seconden event

May 14, 2023

The story is good, somthing new mix with old good isekai ish, some grammar but nothing big all in all a good story, just slow on the cheaper release side.

Can recommend.

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A_Drop_Of_Water

Status: chapter 11: cave bandits

Apr 6, 2023

Ok first this my second review so don't expect me to be an expert or something just gonna review this beacuse it's my cup of tea

First off the MC is 'evil' why? It's gonna be a spoiler if I said why, the MC also does not hesitate to attract attention as she knows that she can take them on her own

Second the novel is about a 'game' (though I have a hunch) its also a VR so you can tell it takes place at 20XX or something (and no it's not SAO)

Third, the MC is A Sadist and does not hesitate to kill or murder something, I tell you and I hope that's not gonna change in the future

The Novel also has almost no grammar error I suppose but if you see something don't hesitate to comment it, also I don't know if the author is new or what so please don't be offended author.

Aaaannndddd that's all I suppose.

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Hollex

Status: chapter 24: elle’s day and...

Aug 6, 2023

If not abandoned this history gives good vibes and is a 5* history without a doubt that must be put in my "in waiting" list for more chapters. This history gives what it promises a TRUE evil female protagonist.

Then why is only 4* in the review you ask... well the format of the writing is annoying like a flashing light in the face.

In the end... if you search for a evil protagonist that is a sadist and loves gore then this is your reading.... the only drawback is that there is not romance nor se.x (At the moment).

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