In a world where gods walk among mortals, governing their settlements and determining their fates, the outcasts and the forsaken forge their own path to salvation. They journey to the untamed frontiers and establish their new home within an ancient forest valley.
Shunned by the gods they once served, these outcasts forge a new path forward, led by the village elders who conspire to create a deity of their own. Through shared stories and collective beliefs, they breathe life into Ebonheim—a goddess born from their dreams and the embodiment of their hope for a brighter future.
As Ebonheim emerges into existence, she must earn the trust of her creators and grow in power to protect the village that brought her to life. But with enemies lurking in the shadows and the truth of her origins carefully guarded, Ebonheim faces a precarious existence. Can the people of the valley keep their divine secret hidden? Will Ebonheim's growing power attract unwanted attention from the gods who scorned her followers?
Follow the captivating story of a fledgling goddess and her devoted followers, as they struggle to survive in a world where the whims of the gods shape the lives of mortals, in an epic saga that spans generations.
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I will update the story twice a week on Mondays and Fridays.
Saga of Ebonheim is my first foray into the LitRPG genre and my first attempt to write a full series. The story will have somewhat of a Kingdom Building element to it as the story progresses though it won't be as mechanically involved as one would expect.
If you're a fan of "That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime", "The Vision of Escaflowne", "Knights & Magic", and "Heroic Age" types of stories, then you might enjoy this tale. Any constructive feedback will be greatly appreciated.
So far it looks really good and fun, no criticism here. The protagonist is so captivating and at the same time real. She struggles and has grown throughout the story (at least so far).
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Around a 4, (Made at chapter 26) (Will probably increase to a 5, if quality stay the same or increases up to the chapter 50 mark).
The story so far is pretty good. There hasn't been too much action to comment on but its been good, characters are well developed, the growth of Ebonheim herself has been a treat of the story.
A Kingdom/village building with a god isn't exactly uncommon, but does a lot of things fun with the concept. Ebonheim feels like a combination of the guardian and child of the village, where they both grow and learn off each other. The bond Ebonheim has with her village and the environment is also nice to see how that develops.
So far the story still feels very much in its early phases, so I'm very curious on how aspects of it will develop, but I guess I just have to wait and see.
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