By Kaze_NG
Rina had a fairly normal childhood. However, it changed when she entered puberty, as she suddenly felt somewhat attracted to her twin sister. Unfortunately, her feelings towards her grew each day until they reached the state, where Rina feared tha
I read the original story a while back, and I remember really enjoying it, so I'm glad to see it's getting a rewrite and some polishing.
In this fanfic, Momonga gets isekai'd along with Pero, Buku, Ulbert, and Tabula, and I have to say, they come across much better than in the original canon. Due to their actions, I can see the parallelism of them becoming like the Six Great Gods of the Slane Theocracy, following in their footsteps towards Godhood.
One of the standout features of this fanfic, in my opinion, is the introduction of a new World Item that not only increases the level cap from Yggdrassil but, after the Isekai, enhances their potential. This opens up a ton of opportunities for the Supreme Beings, who were already maxed out in levels, to learn new skills and grow in their chosen fields, now free from the constraints of their classes. It's exciting to think about mages possibly wielding close combat weapons if they want to. I'm also looking forward to seeing how the NPC characters grow and develop.
Moreover, this fic provides a chance to delve into the personalities of characters like Buku, Pero, Ulbert, and Tabula, especially the last two. This is the first time I've seen these characters used and explored in such depth in a fanfic.
I would definitely recommend giving this story a read if you're a fan of overpowered settings with high-quality writing. There's also an intriguing background plot involving higher beings and Infernal Demon Lords to look forward to.
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This story was great, had a lot of promise and kept me interested. Until my fears came true, Ainz and crew were forced to hold idiot balls so the author could reuse a canon plot event that no longer actually works if the MC has knowledge and not just his canon cluelessness. I may pick up this again after I get over my disgust at the sheer laziness here, but I'm going have to drop it here and go cool down with a book that didn't improve the MCs intelligence but still somehow make him f**king stupid at the same time.
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This is a really good retelling of overlord, I would say it’s better than the light novels considering how one of the books in that series was in my opinion completely pointless. Let’s be honest here for a second no likes the lizard man arc, it doesn’t advance the story, and the characters are unimportant to the larger plot.
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Definitely a good story, featuring some of the other members of the guild alongside our old favorite overlord.
All of the characters are very interesting and likable, and the author makes great use of multiple POVs to elevate them even further.
However, I must make it clear that this story has some very boring and annoying elements, mainly revolving around the reason why the Tomb was isekai'ed to another world.
To be honest, the whole plot surrounding this is unnecessary and leaves a pretty bad taste in your mouth due to the way it was handled.
In my opinion the biggest issue here was Tabula and his wife existing at all, especially his wife and her plot... it was just... well, worth stop reading
ATT: I changed it from 4 stars to 5 after reading almost every other Overlord story on this site. Compared to all but one, this work is a masterpiece.
I still don't like the whole plot about "How Isekai Occurred and its side effects" but in all other aspects, this story is actually very good
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Great rewrite, it definitely flows better and a lot of past criticism is gone now
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