I do like the story, and the characters and writing style is nice, but there is one strong problem, and that is grammar. Unlike most stories with grammar issues, there are no big spelling mistakes, or misplaced words. The only issue is that the story has a lot of run on sentences, and the author doesn't use commas at all, when the story desperately needs them. If the author fixes that one problem, this story will be excellent.
As of Chapter 9, I am hooked. Good story, good plot, though it does feel a little rushed with the MC's relationships. The characters are well done and fleshed out. The world is interesting and I can't wait to see more of it. The only issue with this novel is grammar, and the grammar isn't too bad. A few run on sentances, a couple areas that need comma's, a big block of text or two, and that's it. Overall, excelent story, 10/10 would recommend reading. I just hope it doesn't end soon, and goes for over 100 chapters.
For what few chapters are out currently I absolutely love this novel and wholeheartedly recommend giving it a try. The characters are wonderful and likeable (thats one of the most important parts for me) the world building is pretty damn amazing when you take into account that theres only 5 chapters so far. I almost forgot to mention as the tags have suggested there are pretty frequent s*xual themes but hey im not complaining ;). The only thing I can complain about is the lack of chapters that makes me wanna throw a tantrum like a child who had his toy taken away lol. So go on and give it a try
The story telling and plot is good and the s*x scene are pretty good as well they maybe misspelled words here and there but as far as how the story goes it is linear and very easy to understand and not convoluted and not confusing with stuff just suddenly popping here and there without explanation or even proper introduction. In other words its very excellent read and I can’t wait for more, keep up the awesome work
Brandy is finally able to start her Pokémon adventure!
But in a world where Pokémon are all monster girls with something extra swinging between the legs, becoming a Trainer is much more physically challenging.
Learning to balance h
Jadis has no idea how she died. One minute she’s living her life as a young college student in Pennsylvania, the next she’s hurtling through the unimaginable, incomprehensible void of the space between realities as a lost and detached
Rick a Man in depression is Challenged by his daughter to become more powerful than her within a year on the Worlds first VRMMORPG.
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I woke up naked and all alone in a summoning circle, the only clue to my past is a demon summoning book and the hazy memories of a world very different from the one I find myself in now. I should probably be more concerned with the changes that ha
I do like the story, and the characters and writing style is nice, but there is one strong problem, and that is grammar. Unlike most stories with grammar issues, there are no big spelling mistakes, or misplaced words. The only issue is that the story has a lot of run on sentences, and the author doesn't use commas at all, when the story desperately needs them. If the author fixes that one problem, this story will be excellent.
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As of Chapter 9, I am hooked. Good story, good plot, though it does feel a little rushed with the MC's relationships. The characters are well done and fleshed out. The world is interesting and I can't wait to see more of it. The only issue with this novel is grammar, and the grammar isn't too bad. A few run on sentances, a couple areas that need comma's, a big block of text or two, and that's it. Overall, excelent story, 10/10 would recommend reading. I just hope it doesn't end soon, and goes for over 100 chapters.
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For what few chapters are out currently I absolutely love this novel and wholeheartedly recommend giving it a try. The characters are wonderful and likeable (thats one of the most important parts for me) the world building is pretty damn amazing when you take into account that theres only 5 chapters so far. I almost forgot to mention as the tags have suggested there are pretty frequent s*xual themes but hey im not complaining ;). The only thing I can complain about is the lack of chapters that makes me wanna throw a tantrum like a child who had his toy taken away lol. So go on and give it a try
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This story is so incredibly stupid and dumb while being well written that it is really fun to read and just go brainded.
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Encountering this story is bittersweet... I fell in love with the story but it seems that the story's discontinued.
This is a good story, bummer...
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The story telling and plot is good and the s*x scene are pretty good as well they maybe misspelled words here and there but as far as how the story goes it is linear and very easy to understand and not convoluted and not confusing with stuff just suddenly popping here and there without explanation or even proper introduction. In other words its very excellent read and I can’t wait for more, keep up the awesome work
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I like it. There are some typos but nothing major.
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