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Harry potter: the ring maker
Harry potter: the ring maker
933.5k Views 43355 Favorites 311 Chapters 15 Chapters/Week 1770 Readers
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Synopsis

Nicholas Iron was reborn into the world of harry potter as a orphan with the ring maker system , this is his story.

Genre
ActionAdventureFanfictionFantasySchool LifeSupernatural
Fandom
Harry Potter
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Artifact Crafting Blacksmith Calm Protagonist
Table of Contents 311
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  1. New teacher12 hours ago
  2. Flight12 hours ago
  3. Laughable attemptSep 30, 2023
  4. CommissionsSep 30, 2023
  5. Sol shot arrowsSep 29, 2023
  6. First creationSep 29, 2023
  7. RageSep 28, 2023
  8. Strange materialSep 28, 2023
  9. Collecting lightSep 27, 2023
  10. New crafting styleSep 27, 2023
  11. Unofficial holidaySep 26, 2023
  12. Hallows planSep 26, 2023
  13. Gaunt shackSep 25, 2023
  14. EnragedSep 25, 2023
  15. Concerning development and resolveSep 24, 2023
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      New MysticSupreme
      Status: bullies

      Fun story but the ignorant Dumbledore hate puts a damper on the story as a whole. Seems like the favorite plot point of every generic Harry Potter fanfic out there. Ill keep reading and change my review if the story is deserving but as of now its just average. 

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      schere-r-ki
      Status: aftermath

      I enjoyed the smithing and LotR parts. 

      I beared with the Harry Potter self insert.

      I can't bear the "and everyone clapped" bit.

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      24 Likes · Like

      The premise is very interesting, so points to the writer for creativity 

      However, the story fails to keep you interested, with too short chapters (800 words), the MC protagonist syndrome and the amount of stuff that is thrown at him for nothing. More importantly, the protagonist doesn't make any sense, by that I mean his personality, which is a huge series of contradictions

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      Connor72ND
      Status: no chapter

      I like, it the MC seems smart but not overly so, hes not arrogant like most MCs and he doesn't flaunt the intelligence he does have over everyone, it's a bonus as he wasn't placed in

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      Ravenclaw

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      as most do, he is also muscular which is a delightful surprise for a Harry Potter flick or any flick, so plus 1*. 

      A muscular MC will always get a plus 1* bonus, too many string beans able to lift cars.

      Another plus 1* will be from actually caring about the cast of the original as well also not caring if the story changes.

      The world certainly seems full of life and other characters interactions are taken into account so plus 1*

      This last star is for making things interesting with a system that you actually have to work with rather than getting everything just from points 1*

      Thank you Loskro1 for making this.

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      Efail
      Status: easing into the schedule

      Interesting story so far and well worth a read.

      Good things

      - the crafting aspect is very interesting and the author expands on the magic of the world a lot to make it interesting. Not to mention they are breaking away from canon so it's not just another 'harry potter + random guy' it's an actual story in the universe that the changes have started to slowly build up.

      Bad ish things

      - while the grammar isn't horrible it has a lot of small grammar mistakes that are noticeable. Such as there, their, they're and where/were. Just a minor annoyance rather than anything substantial.

      - It's a fairly generic ff, the MC is a bit of a mary sue and the story constantly needs to remind you about how unique and special the MC is following just about every trope for HP ff it's to the point of the MC has a noticeable scar on their face and bright defining eyes and has an extreme talent with brooms... he's just Harry but better. But it's written well enough that it's still interesting to read.

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      Alastor_Darkwood
      Status: tricky chat

      Really good story with some mystery. The characters are fleshed out and don't feel two dimensional. Storyline somewhat follows the canon, with the difference that that the existence of MC alone makes minor and major differences here and there. Im very exited what comes next. Also while the breakneck speed of 2 chapters a day feels like Readers wettest dream, I hope the author doesn't burn out...

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      Tajarim
      Status: rocky start

      I'm too lazy to write a full review, but this story is pretty neat. Even grammar isn't atrociously bad, so it's easily readable. Just give it a try. 

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      Stars_Toy
      Status: organic smithing experiments(2)

      I think it's very well written, I'm bad at reviews but this had my seal of approval 

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      Whit3M3dusa
      Status: a strange plan

      I enjoy Loskro's writing style as it is quite easy to read and his scripts never lack interesting details and coherence behind the world the wordsmith is presenting us.

      This particular manuscript presents the Harry potter universe in clear light and the characterization of the personalities we love is well done, a great job.

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      4 Likes · Like

      yo so this is my first review and I gotta say this story pretty good, it seems indulgent so not really challenges appearing too much yet but it has a good update speed, grammars acceptable, worldbuilding has got to be the best part and the characters pretty alive. In short well done.

      ps:i hate COOKIES!🍎🍎🍎🍏🍏🍎🍏🍏🍌🍌🍌🍌

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