It's pretty good some ideas are left unexplored they should've been other times side stories could be shuffled around to be a little more cohesive this could use more descriptions about the people it drops characters from being major to a side character well there's no main character cause other took this another direction I liked it though but it's still feels a little odd. I think this is really good for online writing and the author said this a draft so when looking at from that perspective I feel four stars is the correct rating. Keep up the good work author I enjoy this series

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Basically like GATE (the anime), except that a full-on invasion was carried out by the modern-day country, which causes the other fantasy country to roll over and die.

Pretty good writing so far, with few-ish grammatical mistakes.

The author is also highly familiar with military terminology and details, which helps lend credence and realism to the USA depicted in the novel. Overall a fast and enjoyable read.

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Pretty cool what-if series..  The story is told in a... I don't know what to call it.. a blurb writing like way? Each chapters are broken down into said blurbs with alot of shifting around many perspectives. A kind of unique way to write, but it kind of works with this one as it doesn't get bogged down and gets right to the point and next scenes. Author chooses to focus heavily on action... which I love! The only problem with this way of writing is that there is little to no character development... but I don't mind as most other stories I grow impatient with over mundane things... and this has none of it. Good for those that just want to get to the meat of it.

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Amazing story. I think the chapters are a little too short. I also am slightly disappointed that magic isn't really used other than as substitutes to fuel and ammo

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I love how it got vibes from Nihonkoku Shoukan where they different technological levels and always fighting one sided battles. It's so satisfying. There's not a lot of fantasy stuff for now (eg Dragons) but instead you got WW1 Romans, and Nazi Elves being crushed in a one sided battle however I do not see like, their goal. Whether American hegemony on the new continent or survival? I'm expecting them to fight something like in Nihonkoku Shoukan where I'm already getting vibes that the Ravernal Empire will return possibly after the New World War. But overall, this novel is just super satisfying. 

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greetings author!

You have done a very interesting job in this story, a good read.

If you managed to release more chapters it would be very cool, since it has been quite fun to read your work.

Have a long and prosperous life.

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