Rewrite is very rushed feels souless empty husk skiping every character development it can skiping world building skiping emotions. We are unable to really immers ourselfs in the story. We can't even feel like we can care about stuff that's happening. (Sometimes we can to enjoy everything but mostly rush and skip)

So my conclusion is that this is basically a draft that needs rewrite. Fondation is great but it needs to break down the buildings and build it back up stronger and better. 

I know for a fact Author is fully capable to deliver quality product but might have problems at how slowly it progresses for them when they try. 

So ya I would say this is rough diamond that needs some work done and it will be great story. 

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Note: I have not read the original version of this story, so I will not compare that version with the ongoing version of the story.

This story contains a few dark moments that are pretty messed up, but I would not go as far as to say that they are the major focus of the story (that being the way that the main character and the female lead go about their existence while dealing with their current predicament as stated in the synopsis) or even as dark as the author's other ongoing work. This story also has some wholesome moments that really are nice to read.

I also enjoy the way that the author goes about establishing the dynamics between the major and supporting characters of the story (whether they are good people or not) as the story progresses.

Overall, this is an interesting story where the protagonist has struggles that she has to overcome despite all of the amazing things that she can do thanks to her unique bond, then feel free to give this story a read.

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