The two main characters finally manage to overcome their troubles and resonate with each other. Not only this but one of them pledges her heart to the other. So you think with both of these things having happened you'll see them build on this new power and their new relationship. Instead the next chapter it is all taken away when they reveal they haven't been able to resonate again, oh also she just pledged her loyalty nothing else. It feels like you finally get some progress in the story only to step back and start from the beginning. It takes away the emotional impact of the moment and just sends the story right back where it was before.

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I have no idea how the story goes after this moment but I feel no desire to stick around to find out.

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Chasetheman

Status: chapter 10 – match

Dec 29, 2023

So 10 chapters in it is a pretty good story, or at least I think so. There is some good comedy, and the world is really neat. A lot of fun characters to.I really like the main character. They're sort of a cookie cutter standard character, but that's not really all the bad, and plus I'm 10 chapters in and they've been growing a lot. Chapters are decently big and gives them a bunch of moments to shine and grow. The action is pretty cool, and the other action, that being the yuri is sweet. Not to slow but not to quick. A lot of novels tend to just instantly pair the two girls together and get to it, and this sort of started that way but then stopped and actually began to build them up and has a lot of good fluffy romance. I like it.

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