One of if not the best warhammer fanfictions I have ever read. I'm not sure where to rank it compared to another warhammer fanfic I have read called Hearld of the stars, but it definetly is at a similar level. The author is an amazing job at keeping my attention span which is not that different from a gnat engaged with this series. I have been reading this story since I believe october of last year and haven't been upset with character decisions or the lack of anything happening. This story is amazing for those who want action a lore accurate but not overly edgy view of 40k like most official novels can be.

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Puffer64

Status: 41 – Aftershock

Sep 1, 2023

Came here for a warhammer Monster MC but found a girl in warhammer with slime powers.

It was good at first and I gave it a 5 stars but MC is being really dumb about how she wants a humanoid body even it affects her combat capabilities especially since she wants a female body which is subjectively weaker than male body. She even makes herself more beatifull with the cost of becoming more emotional. And she says it is a good thing because she doesnt wants to lose her emotions.

Then, she gets attached to a random human captain and fights demons for them and baby sits them. All the while saying "i can abandon them if things get too bad" which we know it wont and even if it does, she wont leave them.

But i'll give it a 3 stars because author is a great person.

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ThomasMrSheep

Status: c25

Aug 21, 2023

Well written, good character development, overall a really nice fanfic. Love where it's going, excited for more. (May be biased since I love nids n necrons)

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ssssfdghg

Status: 35 – consolidation

Sep 17, 2023

One of the best novels I've read, a real gem unlike most of the fanfics which are harem or bullsh*t power fantesy

now let's place our bets on who are the waifus I say the sisters of bat

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Shuryo_CN

Status: 172 – mokey business

Jan 15, 2025

The person who gave this a 3 star review really confused me in how they described the story. In my POV, I read it as if the MC was a wimp, and the author made the MC more "emotional" just because they wanted to.

What I read instead: the MC starts of disoriented in their new circumstances. They've become an abomination that is quite possibly a God in nature, and they try to keep their human form and emotions to circumvent the nature of her new form of being an emotion-lacking-killing-machine whose only goal is to eat, kill, and live. Therefore = become a bit more emotional = stay a bit more human.

Furthermore, they are not a slime. Tentacle is a more apt description, albeit they could turn into puddle and whatnot.

On the note on the Mc's attachment to the Captain who shows up early in the story (the love interest), they don't simply become attached just cause. Their dynamic gave them good chemistry that made it entirely reasonable for it. Which is such a fun read, considering how smooth and subtle they flirt despite the circumstances.

When I first saw the title as a Warhammer fanfic, I was prepared for a convoluted story where the author just does whatever the fck they want and add elements from other fiction, but no. Its genuinely well written and each chapter goes by so quickly that I wish I had more to read. I dont know much about Warhammer lore and it's cannon story, but from what I could tell, the author tries their best to write is as plausibly as they can.

I would definitely recommend, especially if readers like GL with some good action and sorta OP MC

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MrFischkopf

Status: 47 – i’m a merciful pile...

Oct 23, 2023

Up until now a really fun read. Didn't even notice english wasn't your first language. It's a story where I can't wait for the next chapter to upload.

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SleepySylph

Status: 57 – realspace, i missed you.

Nov 21, 2023

Very fun read, the protag is a nice mix of insanity and morality that fits surprisingly well in the universe, and the supporting cast are all pretty fun too, especially the love interest, she's great. Its not often you can see 40k stories with a focus on actually fixing that damn mess of a universe, absolutely worth a read even if you only have casual or no knowledge of the lore. ❤️

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