A young man born of vampires from a prestigious family.
Bloodlines that are on the brink of collapse, the end of a race.
A talented mind, but a crippled body.
Carrier of a bloodline desired by many and hope for his family.
Shackled by his inability to use his power and rejected by his peers.
He was visited by one who calls himself a trader.
His fortune or demise now lays in the hands of a creature with an offer he cannot refuse.
Intentions that seems projected far into the future, he has only one option.
What will Ocelio choose to become when he's thrown into a new world against his will.
With the opportunity to obtain everything he wants and more...at a certain price.
*note: This novel contains themes that may hurt the sensibility of the younger readers. Please do not read if you are under 16 years old.
Grammar: up to par to other story that iv'e read and haven't noticed anything other then the occasional 1 letter mistake
World building: pretty small but not because of lack of detail but there only being 12 chapters
characters: there pretty fleshed out the MC feels real gets scared, cries and laughs like a real person not some 2D op character
Story: follows a young adult living life as a crippled vampire and gets to live life how he should've but with a cost
Disclaimer not a critic or anything of the like just read a lot an like what I like
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