This is one of my favorites (if not the favorite) that I've read on this site. The characterization, research, realism, and so on make it one of a kind, and it all flows so well. What else... The grammar and sentence structure are excellent. The slight psychic elements took me off guard at first, but it adds an air of mystique that I can't hate, so very good with that one. I also like her siblings as characters, which had the potential to go horribly (i.e. the siblings are complete deadweights) but Mei executed it brilliantly.
All in all, I think it absolutely deserves a read (probably not if you're faint of heart though, haha).
Your story is so moving! Every character comes to life and you can fell their joy and pain. Every detail fleshed out. Thank you for sharing such an inspirational story.
This is one of my favorites (if not the favorite) that I've read on this site. The characterization, research, realism, and so on make it one of a kind, and it all flows so well. What else... The grammar and sentence structure are excellent. The slight psychic elements took me off guard at first, but it adds an air of mystique that I can't hate, so very good with that one. I also like her siblings as characters, which had the potential to go horribly (i.e. the siblings are complete deadweights) but Mei executed it brilliantly.
All in all, I think it absolutely deserves a read (probably not if you're faint of heart though, haha).
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Your story is so moving! Every character comes to life and you can fell their joy and pain. Every detail fleshed out. Thank you for sharing such an inspirational story.
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