It is entertaining to read and it does follow an original path, with the MC ending up in kumo intead of the usual konoha. This also leads to quite a few original interactions with characters that usually dont appear much in fanfics.

But on the other side the story and the MC just paint everything that kumo does, it doesnt matter how disgusting it is, in the best light posible, and picks everything that konoha does and defecates on top of it.

As an example...

Spoiler

It picks the atempt of kindaping of a child to turn her into a breeding horse, and acts like kumo is great for all of that event.

But also picks how konoha killed one of their own to hide the same event to prevent a war that would lead to many deaths, and acts like they are horrible for doing so.

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And there are many events like this. Even the characters are treated the same way, in which the people that he likes instantly become atached or interested in him... but the people he doesnt like or that are against him seem to become the personification of their own flaws.

Basically, there is too much of the plot and characters in the world bending over backwards for the MC and his view of things.

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Habutheri

Status: chakra

Oct 17, 2023

My review has some spoilers.

The protagonist is genuinely intelligent and knows how to use his age to his advantage. I like the fact that he is part of Kumogakure and his relationship with his sister.

However, I can only give 4 stars due to the fact that the novel is possibly going down a path that will leave some readers angry, the novel won over many readers by showing itself to be realistic and intelligent. But the author is pushing too hard if the protagonist manages to make the entire Uchiha clan abandon the Leaf Village and become his subordinates while himself is still 4 years old.

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SuperciliousSnail

Status: 62 kotoamatsukami

Jul 11, 2024

This fic is pretty pure handwavium, in that; "things just work out" because they suit the author's wishes. Everything is easy, and no one is competent unless they are the MC or are somehow assisting the MC.

The premise is a good one, but, the execution is just incredibly bland. In 62 chapters the MC is 6 years old and is already:

The future Raikage.

Little brother to the two tails.

Capable of withstanding tailed beast chakra.

Has learned the lightning cloak jutsu.

Has outmaneuvered the; Hokage, Danzo, Uchiha, Hyuga, and all the clans of Konoha.

Have Hinata, Neji, Haku, Shisui, and Itachi as minions.

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Burasel

Status: rock lee

Apr 27, 2024

The story is fine and all but. You really have to ignore some stuff that dosn't make sense to enjoy it but it's not that bad. There is much worse out there.

But the problem is that as he gets stronger, he gets dumber. And it's not linear but exponential. Really sad to see honestly. Author really did the MC dirty in the later chapters.

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Dondiegow

Status: cassistant

Sep 17, 2023

How good it is to have a story that doesn't take place in Konoha.

With a very interesting premise, good writing with a slow but pleasant pace, I'm really enjoying the way the characters are being presented and developed. I've never seen any fic with this plot, I'm looking forward to more chapters, I just hope the author doesn't abandon it like so many others here...

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