Just before his high-school carrier was to start, Motohama Ryu had the most vivid and bizarre dream of his best friends Issei and Matsuda being devils in the world of the supernatural. Thankfully it was only a bad dream, or was it? Find out what happens when Motohama receives a new power from his smartphone, and a set of memories from a being from another world!
This story wont have a 'big harem for DxD only 9', or follow canon events exactly. Motohama may break the common-sense of the world while keeping his humanity, or will he, nah?
This story is a blending of my other two stories, but I will tell it in such a way that you wont have to read the others.
(A/N I own nothing but my OC's and other two stories! The three stories are independent of one another and don't actually exist together.)
- Just wanted to say hello.Sep 1, 2024
- Not A Chapter: After Reincarnating, My System Quit!Oct 8, 2023
- Countdown to the Peace Talks Began!Oct 8, 2023
- A Full House!Oct 7, 2023
- A Very Open House!Oct 7, 2023
- Sixty-Nine!Oct 6, 2023
- Kokabiel Brought Dogs, I Brought A Squeak Toy!Oct 6, 2023
- Day of the Attack!Oct 5, 2023
- Let’s Karaoke!Oct 5, 2023
- Choose Your Own Adventure!Oct 4, 2023
- Kuoh Academy In June!Oct 4, 2023
- Blazing Inferno of Scorching Flames!Oct 3, 2023
- New Transfer Student!Oct 3, 2023
- I Miss Canon!Oct 2, 2023
- Yasaka, Kunou, Sakura, and Father!Oct 2, 2023
- 320 reading
- 52 plan to read
- 31 completed
- 8 paused
- 28 dropped
Now that I've caught up, I feel obligated to give this masterpiece a review (C73).
Writing Quality: 3/5
I don't know if English is the native language of the author, but I noticed a few grammar mistakes. Also, commas aren't consistently involved.
I actually like First-POV, however, in this case I often can't put myself in the MC's shoes.
Stability of Updates: 5/5
What can I say about this? 2/chapters per day.
Story Development: 4/5
As a fanfic, the author has the advantage that a rough storyline is already given.
One thing I like about this one is that the author doesn't follow canon, but the events still happen in one way or another.
Personally, I'm not a fan of the many little timeskips, but I understand that the author has to keep the story going.
Perhaps the gaps could have been filled by OC arcs.
Character Design 5/5
I don't have much to complain about here. The characters feel like in canon (most of them) and the author defenetivly knows what he is doing here.
Another thing I like is that there are almost no OCs used.
Yet another thing I really have to praise the author for.
In Harem Story there is often the issue that many readers don't want non-virgins in the harem.
In all of his stories, the author has managed to make people not care if a harem member was a virgin or not.
For this the author gets my respect.
World Background 4/5
Here too, the author has a certain basic framework.
DxD world is still the DxD world.
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Small tip/wish from me
Find yourself an editor :)
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