Twelve years ago, the world as we knew it fell to the Aberrations. Cities across the world were razed to the ground, and entire nations fell overnight.
But during Earth’s darkest hour, unlikely saviors arrived through portals that suddenly appeared all across the world.
Legions upon legions of Magical Girls. Soldiers with colorful, glowing hair wielding swords twice their size. Pilots in bipedal mech suits that bordered on magic itself. These warriors stymied the tides of death and despair, and were hailed as Earth's saviors.
In the end, the Terrans may have saved the world from complete destruction… but the world as the denizens of Earth knew it ended in ruin and slow, crumbling despair.
Ikki won't accept that life for his family. Not anymore.
As the first child of Earth offered a scholarship to study magitech on Terra, he finally has a chance to change things. To learn the secrets of Terran magic and technology, to make a name for himself — and to build a future strong enough to protect his family and world. To fight so that his loved ones would no longer have to take on dangerous odd jobs just to make it to their next meal.
Then, on one final salvage run with his father’s crew, everything goes horribly wrong when they are captured by slavers.
But as he escapes his confines onto the open road, he finds something impossible. A sleek, pristine briefcase. Too pristine to be left in the ruins of a long-abandoned highway. Like it was waiting for him.
Inside was a Terran magitech construct. A construct far more advanced than anything he'd ever studied. A machine that addressed him by name.
“I’ve been waiting for you… Ikazuchi.”
Ikki once thought magical girls, world-ending monsters, and ancient conspiracies belonged in someone else's story. Fanciful tales for kids from the boonies like him to dream about.
But fate has plans, and it won't let him go without a fight.
What to expect:
- A near-future cyberpunk setting with: Real Robots Mecha. Magitech. Frilly magical girls. Urban fantasy.
- A 'weak' but useful protagonist.
-The usual horrifying extradimensional monsters associated with RR's Magical Girl subgenre.
-Lite LitRPG elements in the form of a tactical HUD and resource management apparatus that serves the plot.
-NOT A HAREM!
Really enjoyed it. Overall, a fun plot with great action and good world building. The only thing holding it back for me is dialogue. Most of the characters are teenagers, but often speak like adults. I sometimes felt that the characters felt 'samey' at times. Sometimes the dialogue feels out of character, like, for example, a character that's usually casual will start speaking very formal when giving backstory or exposition. It's hard to explain, but I didn't feel it was a big enough issue to put me off from enjoying the story. Wish Scribblehub would let me put a 4.5, though because of the dialogue I can't bring myself to give it a 5.
The prose itself is good, with only the occasional spelling error or improper line break in the middle of a sentence. Also felt the pacing was pretty good.
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This story is great. Just straight up. The action scenes are really exciting and well written, and the plot is very well paced. The writing style is clear and readable, and of course, the worldbuilding is very well thought-out and interesting. The author does have some shakiness at points with the dialogue, but the overall character building is still fantastic. If you're into Type-MOON and other functional magic Urban Fantasy systems or HoYoverse style multiversal worldbuilding, PizzaPizza's work here is up your alley. He used to write Worm, Fate/Stay Night, and Madoka fanfic, and it shows.
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The first couple of chapters are slow. With a lot of expedition trying to explain the crazy world. Yet it is needed since I've been comparing it to Gintama. Similar to Gintama premise is a samurai in a world conquered by aliens. You needed twenty episodes to get the full pictures of the crazy premise of the show and why it make sense.
This crazy world combines three genres! Magical girls genre, post apocolypse scifi genre, and magical nobles highschool genre. If I am losing you, great that is why I am comparing it Gintama who has confusing premise. But it make sense when you read it.
If you can survive the firsts couple of chapters you will be rewarded with a great story that you will blaze through. It will grow on you like moss and mind control you to read more.
Go ahead and read this, that's my recommendation.
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