Stories of cultivators.

I'm a newbie writer, please leave helpful and constructive feedback so that I can improve the stories. Each of the chapters will be improved even when new chapters come up (they come up irregularly). Chapters will consist of the following format 'Chapter Title - Variation Number (Revision Number, Date of Revision)'. Chapters in their first few revisions will have more tell and little show; more dialogue and plot will be added based on your suggestions.