By FieryKathy
Thanks to a birthday gift from her loving sister, this trans girl is set on an adventure of self-discovery, exploration and love! The story may or may not include catgirls, deities and Full-dive VRMMO’s. :p I am bad at writing story descript
I’m a huge fan of the Alien series, so when I saw this new work I was immediately excited. The clear writing and plot got me hooked even further. It’s probably too early to post a review, but I want to say keep up the wonderful work. I hope to see some creative kills!
You got dis! (๑•̀ㅂ•́) و✧
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Good stuff... that is all
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The concept is interesting, though somewhat over-used. Not that I fault the author, if it works, it works, and, from what I can see, this book is more of a way to practice their writing skills, which, valid.
Firsts chapters had good action and atmosphere.
However, that is soon lost as the story progresses.
I believe the main problem is that the author didn't have a plan, not even the state of the world our protagonist resides in, and that's problematic. You can see when they started to add things and try to expand the story, not the worse decision, I must say, but it can give the reader a shock if anything is showed too abruptly (guess if that wasn't exactly what happened).
As a practice, this is pretty good (for the author). It helps to put ideas on paper and to learn how to construct a world. It is, as they say, step by step we walk a meter.
And as a complete book, well, I can't judge it, as this isn't one.
Either way, I wish good luck to the author and say that I admire the effort. I hope that you never stop learning and advancing in your chosen field.
Goodbye and good day :)
** I have not read everything, so maybe after a couple more chapter it gets better, but I don't know.
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love this book and any like this as it sheds light on the alien franchise. Please continue writing this and anything similar.
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