It needs some work, but a dew editing passes and more details added would benefit the story. All that being said there is something here. It just needs the time to grow into something beautiful.
I like a lot. There are small forced steps at the beginning but if you ignore them you can enjoy the story well. Things happen out of the MC's sight that leave one waiting for development.
It needs some work, but a dew editing passes and more details added would benefit the story. All that being said there is something here. It just needs the time to grow into something beautiful.
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I like a lot. There are small forced steps at the beginning but if you ignore them you can enjoy the story well. Things happen out of the MC's sight that leave one waiting for development.
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