Sam successfully ran away from his haunting past with a heavy price; his memories. Now living in a new world where local customs are twisted and women with powers are the one in control, Sam with no memories of his previous life must make the best of his fresh new start.
Nothing better than a reversed world with evil women crazy for MC. My only hope is you'll continue to update.
Your grammar is really good. Few mistakes if any. I would say that your main flaw is dialogue although for the most part it is fine: for example when MC is talking to girl he saved in coffee shop, they are talking and after 1 or two lines the girl suddenly says I'm having a ton of fun or something like that. It felt rushed and when writing dialogue you should take ur time.
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