It is very a enjoyable read, at least I did enjoy it till the very end of the 40eth chapter when I found something terrifying.
The author asked to go to his patreon for an 'r18' scene in a story where the whole story is about the 2 characters relationship with each other and although it is an 'r18' thing it also deepens their relationship and bond, which makes me furious that after reading 40 chapters for free I have to pay to read a part of the story just because its r18.
I would get it if it was a stand alone thing where it didnt affect the plot and would support it, however this is horrendous as it is part of the plot even if it is r18.
Overall I am greatly disappointed with the author. Feel free to enjoy the story if you dont feel the same as me and if you do save yourself the frustration.
An ok read wasn't expecting much but the author needs a proofreader or editor as plenty of errors are present, and the storytelling is a little all over the place such that it confuses as to what is happening and why.
Also, readers be warned some of the plot is behind paywalls (which from his/her Patreon is only $1), and won't have a delayed post.
Very enjoyable and sweet story so far but dark times are brewing and the only thing the author needs is an editor to go back over to fix some wrong wordings (wincest is a thing so be warned if thats not ur cup of tea)
It is very a enjoyable read, at least I did enjoy it till the very end of the 40eth chapter when I found something terrifying.
The author asked to go to his patreon for an 'r18' scene in a story where the whole story is about the 2 characters relationship with each other and although it is an 'r18' thing it also deepens their relationship and bond, which makes me furious that after reading 40 chapters for free I have to pay to read a part of the story just because its r18.
I would get it if it was a stand alone thing where it didnt affect the plot and would support it, however this is horrendous as it is part of the plot even if it is r18.
Overall I am greatly disappointed with the author. Feel free to enjoy the story if you dont feel the same as me and if you do save yourself the frustration.
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An ok read wasn't expecting much but the author needs a proofreader or editor as plenty of errors are present, and the storytelling is a little all over the place such that it confuses as to what is happening and why.
Also, readers be warned some of the plot is behind paywalls (which from his/her Patreon is only $1), and won't have a delayed post.
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This is a nice story. The relationships between the characters were fun to learn about.
The writing style and characters make it a fun read!
The main character, Gu Jiao is cute! I wish she was my daughter.
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Very enjoyable and sweet story so far but dark times are brewing and the only thing the author needs is an editor to go back over to fix some wrong wordings (wincest is a thing so be warned if thats not ur cup of tea)
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