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So far it is wonderfully written. And I look forward to more.
There is no big grammatical errors that I have noticed or broken the flow. So far the characters have some depth but it is hard to tell with the little bit we have so far, but I expect wonderful character development. The lore of the world is fairly deep and seemingly well thought out. As for story hard to tell since not much had happened yet but it isn't stagnant or moving too fast so far. Hopefully the protagonist isn't caught up with feeling useless or undervaluing themselves but hopefully from the tags and the summary they will recognize their power and have Atleast a normal human level of dignity, if so I believe this can be a very good fiction. I will update this once there is more chapters, but for now I would highly recommend you give it a try with how short it is currently and the potential it has.
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Well written characters, an interesting setting, and what promises that an interesting story on the way. In particular I like how the main character is written, she is realistic or her actions make believable sense.
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it is quite well written and pretty cute, which is what I look for in this genre
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