So far, I've liked the story. The female lead seems to know what she wants and although I think she was very stupid and selfish in the past, she seems to be working on that. My only sadness for her is that both lifetimes, she tends to live for men and not her own life. The story is very interesting and right up my alley.

HOWEVER, the grammar mistakes are quite jarring. I'm going on the assumption that English isn't the author's first language and hope that he/she can get an editor if possible. The story line is interesting and if you can read MTL, you can read this. I don't mean the grammar is that bad, just that it takes you out of the reading experience like MTL does. I'll update my review as things progress.

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This is a wonderful and fluffy love story about two people who weren't meant to be together in the past life, but miraculously obtained their true happiness in the new life. The story is fluffy and touching. The heroine was blind in her past and cast away the true diamond of a man for the sake of the unworthy false guy who was beautiful outside, but rotten inside. Fortunately, she obtained a chance to make things right.I like this story sooo much. It is very good despite small grammar mistakes. And it's much easier to read than MTL. But, yes, to let more people see its brilliance it's recommended to edit it.

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