This book is the reason why I joined scribblehub. Very promising, although the author hasn't updated in quite a while. I disagree with the reviewer below that this book has nothing to do with the description. It is a very heartwarming story between the Veria siblings. She did became a baby like what the description said and also her entire family did cling onto her as soon as she was born.
I'm looking forward to the updates! Please come back soon!
While this story is pretty good aside from a couple grammatical errors, I am not invested enough to continue reading past this point in hopes of reaching the point of the prologue.
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so, to the point I have read, and most likely for another couple dozen chapters, the MC is a baby, who cannot speak or move. While some people enjoy these stories, I personally dislike them as the MC is essentially unable to interact with the world and at that point the MC isn't really the MC, but the people who can interact with the world.
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My verdict is that if you enjoy a well written baby MC type story (at least from what I have read), you should definitely read this. If you dislike baby MC, you may want to read a different story or wait for new story arcs.
I am rating this story 3 stars for good dialogue and writing with a interesting plot for the future, but I have removed two stars as the prologue and description so far have nothing to do with the story. After all, I suppose your career really doesn't matter if you can't even move.
Thank you for all the chapters author!! I'm so happy for the updates and I can't wait for when Eugenia will be kidnapped and separated. Please take care and stay safe!! Fully support this book!
There are a couple big issues with this story, luckily not grammar at least as far as I can remember, these issues ultimately killed any enthusiasm for the story that I had.
1. The chapters are slowly paced. Meaning not much happens in them.
2. The STORY is slowly paced. Not only are the chapters slow but the actual story drags. I'm gonna be honest I essentially dropped it like a chapter after the attack at the palace. While I did stick around until around chapter 40, dropped this a week ago and forgot to review, THE ATTACK WAS STILL GOING ON. Nothing happens in this plot.
3. Honestly updates are too slow and too short for this pacing.
Basically if the pacing issue was fixed this could be a pretty good web novel.
Really interesting so far. There are small grammar errors here and there but there is a tiny amount of them so unless you go digging for them imo I doubt you would find them. The MC’s past is very mysterious to me or maybe I just forgot some stuff by now. Idk but it’s exciting to see twins like this. Thank you for all the hard work you put in.
Hmmmmm - this story makes me wonder if the author has ever seen a 3 year old. In this story, babies can run 10km with loggs attached, shoot guns, do martial arts... and its not a lit rpg story with stats, or one with magic, or a cultivation world that could somehow support this. No, this is a 'historical - low magic/no magic' setting.
While the story in itselfe is nice enough to read (from a comedic perspective (it has also some fluff elements)), I still had to take some breaks just because it was so... well, babies with guns - I leave it to you to judge - and I speak plural, not just mc!
I am having issues with flow. It a good story. No issues with that. But I just can't read it cuz every time I get immersed into it, something suddenly jumps out at me which breaks the immersion. So not for me. Also bad paving issues. Like chapters are a bit too short and the pov is all over the place. Might try out a tag for pov.
SYNOPSIS:
After a painful separation from her boyfriend, Bing Shi gets an opportunity to meet him again. Under one condition. To get her wish granted, she will have to travel to different worlds and finish all the assigned missions from the
Yasenia is a child born different from the rest, her mother, Tatyana, used an ancient technique she found to absorb the world’s energy to get pregnant instead of having regular intercourse. Her objective was to create a lover for herself sin
This book is the reason why I joined scribblehub. Very promising, although the author hasn't updated in quite a while. I disagree with the reviewer below that this book has nothing to do with the description. It is a very heartwarming story between the Veria siblings. She did became a baby like what the description said and also her entire family did cling onto her as soon as she was born.
I'm looking forward to the updates! Please come back soon!
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While this story is pretty good aside from a couple grammatical errors, I am not invested enough to continue reading past this point in hopes of reaching the point of the prologue.
so, to the point I have read, and most likely for another couple dozen chapters, the MC is a baby, who cannot speak or move. While some people enjoy these stories, I personally dislike them as the MC is essentially unable to interact with the world and at that point the MC isn't really the MC, but the people who can interact with the world.
My verdict is that if you enjoy a well written baby MC type story (at least from what I have read), you should definitely read this. If you dislike baby MC, you may want to read a different story or wait for new story arcs.
I am rating this story 3 stars for good dialogue and writing with a interesting plot for the future, but I have removed two stars as the prologue and description so far have nothing to do with the story. After all, I suppose your career really doesn't matter if you can't even move.
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Thank you for all the chapters author!! I'm so happy for the updates and I can't wait for when Eugenia will be kidnapped and separated. Please take care and stay safe!! Fully support this book!
Read More
There are a couple big issues with this story, luckily not grammar at least as far as I can remember, these issues ultimately killed any enthusiasm for the story that I had.
1. The chapters are slowly paced. Meaning not much happens in them.
2. The STORY is slowly paced. Not only are the chapters slow but the actual story drags. I'm gonna be honest I essentially dropped it like a chapter after the attack at the palace. While I did stick around until around chapter 40, dropped this a week ago and forgot to review, THE ATTACK WAS STILL GOING ON. Nothing happens in this plot.
3. Honestly updates are too slow and too short for this pacing.
Basically if the pacing issue was fixed this could be a pretty good web novel.
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I love the fluff in this story so much. I cant wait to see how this story develops! Thank you for your hard work author-sama!
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Really interesting so far. There are small grammar errors here and there but there is a tiny amount of them so unless you go digging for them imo I doubt you would find them. The MC’s past is very mysterious to me or maybe I just forgot some stuff by now. Idk but it’s exciting to see twins like this. Thank you for all the hard work you put in.
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Has potential and I am enjoying it. Looking forward to further development and intend to see the story to the end.
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Hmmmmm - this story makes me wonder if the author has ever seen a 3 year old. In this story, babies can run 10km with loggs attached, shoot guns, do martial arts... and its not a lit rpg story with stats, or one with magic, or a cultivation world that could somehow support this. No, this is a 'historical - low magic/no magic' setting.
While the story in itselfe is nice enough to read (from a comedic perspective (it has also some fluff elements)), I still had to take some breaks just because it was so... well, babies with guns - I leave it to you to judge - and I speak plural, not just mc!
Read More
I am having issues with flow. It a good story. No issues with that. But I just can't read it cuz every time I get immersed into it, something suddenly jumps out at me which breaks the immersion. So not for me. Also bad paving issues. Like chapters are a bit too short and the pov is all over the place. Might try out a tag for pov.
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