I can only say that this needs an editor fluent in english.

It has an interesting concept at the start (although it never explained why Luffy having 2 fruits powers doesn't blow anyone's minds, you know being that normally eating a second fruit would blow you up and stuff.

But the more you go into the story, the more mistakes and repetitions of the same text with barely changed words (those damned repetitions) start to show. It takes the fun of reading it for me and fills me with frustration.

Other than that, just a normal spellcheck, reduce the amount of onomatopoeias and you have a nice story with a fun concept.

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A great novel. 

In my opinion, this is one of the best one piece fanfictions (maybe even the best in the future).

This novel is not a gender reversal, it's just that Law here is replaced by his sister (Lami).

I don't know why this novel is still lacking fans even though the storyline is very exciting.

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It's a bit rough at the start, dropped twice before chapter 50, but it does get better overall as you read further. There are some sentances here and there that don't make a lot of sense but that is most likely due to english not being the authors first language.

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This story is really great for me at least, I am enjoying reading it people need to try reading it properly cause its really good and fun, there a few errors in the grammar and there's a part the author said wapol instead of wyper the great shandian warrior and when the author don't know what pronounce to use for laboon going back to she to he or vise versa ? So I was confused for a moment there, but I really like the story and would read it till the end idk why the rating was low, waiting for more chapters. ✨

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Enjoyed this enough to read to it's current chapter.I think the genderbender category is probably stopping a lot of potential readers as they expect the MC to be a girl. Not that I care as I enjoy both.

Overall a well written story, follows the one piece story quite closely but has some more aggressive vibes given that the MC is a harem king intending to uplift and conquest as he sails the sea's.

Early cheats play a key role in affecting the original storyline, I'm looking forward to seeing where this ends up

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