- 14: The UnderestimatedNov 7, 2020
- Poll and AnnouncementNov 6, 2020
- Interlude ISep 13, 2020
- [Quill] Character PageJul 20, 2020
- 13: It’s Just Easier To AskJun 1, 2020
- 12.5: ExtraMay 22, 2020
- 12: The Goblin TaxmanApr 25, 2020
- 11: Glad To Have Met YouMar 31, 2020
- 10. Re-living The MemoryMar 11, 2020
- 9: Then Came VisitorsMar 10, 2020
- 8: The Madness of QuillMar 9, 2020
- 7: Internal ScuffleMar 8, 2020
- 6: Dammit CarlMar 6, 2020
- 5: The Strongest Party in TownMar 6, 2020
- 4: The BakerMar 5, 2020
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If you like shapeshifter seduction then this novel might be for you.
There's also a succubus that could possess people.
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The story lacks scene descriptions, character descriptions and a calm start.
The first chapter has too many characters who you're apparerntly already supposed to know. I don't know them. The resulting story is confusing as f**k.
Characters are introduced by having someone suddenly start talking to them. Then, during a dialogue, characters are given alternative titles, which feels like the author trying to gently introduce details, but instead it just confuses you on who is in a particular scene.
Scenes themselves are very short and there are a lot of time skips.
After two chapters, I understood that someone (Kristoffer?) runs a bakery, his door got wrecked (somehow?), some small or young guy was supposed to watch an oven but didn't. The small guy apparently read a book, for which another character had a solution.
Then someone else came as a replacement (why?). They're a woman and are called Penelope. We somehow shorten this to Nel, and then there's some hubbub about a melon pan, but the actual object isn't properly described... Or I forgot.
The whole "monster" angle is not there. Characters might be monsters, but we're never told or shown.
TL;DR: story delivers something, it's not what it promises, and it's super confusing.
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