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My Town’s been Infiltrated by Monsters
My Town’s been Infiltrated by Monsters
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"Another great day!" Kristoffer stretches under the rising sun and breathes in the breeze of the sea in front of him.

But at his back is a town where shadows unveil screams of horror that turn into creepy mumbles, a street that feels like all the vendors know each other more than they let on, a syndicate that's feared even by the King, and the syndicate's boss brilliantly and reluctantly acting as Peacekeeper and secret Mayor.

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Follow Kristoffer as he interacts with his neighbors and rediscover that the inhabitants of the port town of Arkbay are more than meets the eye.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/28187/my-towns-been-infiltrated-by-monsters

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      Pimgd
      Status: 2: inn-credulous memories
      Mar 8, 2020

      The story lacks scene descriptions, character descriptions and a calm start.

      The first chapter has too many characters who you're apparrntly already supposed to know. I don't know them. The resulting story is confusing as f**k.

      Characters are introduced by having someone suddenly start talking to them. Then, during a dialogue, characters are given alternative titles, which feels like the author trying to gently introduce details, but instead it just confuses you on who is in a particular scene.

      Scenes themselves are very short and there are a lot of time skips.

      After two chapters, I understood that someone (Kristoffer?) runs a bakery, his door got wrecked (somehow?), some small or young guy was supposed to watch an oven but didn't. The small guy apparently read a book, for which another character had a solution.

      Then someone else came as a replacement (why?). They're a woman and are called Penelope. We somehow shorten this to Nel, and then there's some hubbub about a melon pan, but the actual object isn't properly described... Or I forgot.

      The whole "monster" angle is not there. Characters might be monsters, but we're never told or shown.

      TL;DR: story delivers something, it's not what it promises, and it's super confusing.

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