Astral Connections (Old Version)
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Igysil Village
Polius
Village Chief of Igysil.
Abilities:
- Ramus Vebrium: Allows Polius to communicate with nature and gather sensory information from them.
- Ramus Leafier: Control leaves and manifests a leaf storm.
- Ramus Exectis: Control tree roots, drag enemy down to the ground or pierce through their body.
Empedocles
Known to be the wisest Elder of Igysil village.
Apollonius Theo
Igysil's only Apothecary. In charge of the Acolytes.
Lydia
Encharged of raising the child of prophecy with Medea.
Medea
Encharged of raising the child of prophecy with Lydia.
Kinon
In charge of Igysil's farms
Harmonia
Head Hunter of Igysil village, leader of all the Hunters.
Terminology
Astral Spirits
Unknown.
Exile Monsters
Unknown.
Rune Beasts
Ruler Class: A group of beasts that rule their corresponding species. They are smarter than normal beasts and can grant abilities. While they are weaker than Exile Monsters, they are a dangerous threat.
Astral Ability
Unknown.
Location
Igysil Village
A village led by the current Chief, Polius. Surrounded by a dense forest and was attacked by an Exile Monster.
Apis Village
A village known for its Zenon beekeeping. The village faced total annihilation against the beast tide. It was the originator for the Apis Teracus.
- Small UpdateMar 16, 2019
- Chapter 8: AbyssFeb 24, 2019
- Chapter 7: DoubtFeb 18, 2019
- Chapter 6: Gathered TogetherFeb 12, 2019
- Chapter 5: Honey and DarlingFeb 3, 2019
- Chapter 4: AftermathFeb 2, 2019
- Chapter 3: The ProphecyFeb 2, 2019
- Chapter 2: MayhemFeb 2, 2019
- Chapter 1: A TideFeb 2, 2019
- PrologueFeb 2, 2019
- ForewordsFeb 2, 2019
Table of Contents
A decent story that gives off a lot of similar vibes to xuanhuan Chinese Novels, though we don't immediately follow a protagonist seeking to transcend the heavens.
The writing style is promising, but mechanically needs polishing and TLC from an editor. There are sentence structure issues and mischosen words scattered throughout, which could be a potential turnoff. If they were fixed though, I think that it'd be a really enjoyable style.
So far, the story is still in the prologue arc and setting up the groundwork for what comes later. Because of that, it's not too clear how things will go, but I'll tentatively rate it a 4 due to the story's potential.
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