By Addyctive
Abaddon Bael, the eldest son of the lord of house Bael and twin of Sairaorg Bael, was born with the power of destruction at his fingertips. He was born in the center of a political maelstrom within the Underworld as his existence meant a lot of th
I like it - could use twice the smut/lemon but that's just my thing. Don't be afraid to let that freak flag fly and get kinky lol. Unless it's NTR/MC gets cheated on. Because I/We do not like that. Great fanfic keep the chapters coming please. :)
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If you're looking for a different take on Spider-Man, this story is for you! THIS version of Peter isn't afraid to give the bad guys exactly what they deserve--and he's pretty popular with the ladies! I'm definitely looking forward to see how things further develop! Great job Author-san!!
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It's a fun, well written novel, but some points are really annoying like when the villains have plot armour that keeps saving them from death. Makes the "MC kills" tag pretty useless when you're just killing grunts.
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just like Midknight97 said, it is different. I LOVED it; maybe a bit uncomfortable at first cause of some depressing sh*t but it was all good since it made me cheer the MC more for his revenge. There are wholesome moments too, and lots of you-know-what. In my opinion, this is a great fan-fic. Some veteran who have read countless fics may disagree with me.
Grammar- dont remember seeing any major errors that would disrupt the flow of my reading, if there are some, they are very few and minor ones.
Love interests- more than enough.
MC- he's flawed but everybody in reality is flawed; unlike the movies where for some b*tch a*s reason siper-man forgives the villain who killed his AUNT. This one, ohhh boy, this one does not pull his punches, not by a looong shot.
i cant think of any other things that I wanna write about now (I'm very bad at reviewing things). You guys can ask me if you want, ill try to answer it asap.
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Concept is good, I love reading villains and Spider-Man definitely has potential, but the execution falls flat. There aren't a lot of grammatical errors but the writing itself doesn't flow, feels clunky.
Even if you get past that the story is horrible. Every human interaction is off, the romance and s*x especially. It's like listening to a middle schooler dictate his ideal power fantasy as he slowly hyperventilates and then faints while making an "oopsie" in his pants.
Immature doesn't begin to cover it, and weird is too vague and overused.
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