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My issues with the story are as thus. The author has us read a discussion that we see the outcome of and then the MC just repeats it in his head making me and every reader read it twice for no gain.
Second issue is the whole Ancient one debacle that is her title. The author just does not use the word THE before ancient one so it just reads wrong. Every sentence with her title/moniker is like that.
"Ancient one helped me with "instead of the correct "The Ancient one helped me with". Ancient one is not her name. I don't get why you think it is. If he's greeting her he would say Ancient one. If he's talking in his head its The Ancient one and the same if he's talking to others about her.
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Seems like an interesting plot, changing the spider to a dragon.
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