2k Views 4 Favorites 36 Chapters 0 Chapters/Week 37 Readers 1 Reviews 40.2k Words Jun 14, 2025 lambenttyto As a duchess, they call me Lady Ava Ryder, and since I’m the XO officer on the Imperial flagship Malkyrion, the proper way to address me while in uniform is “Lady Commander.” I am a high-ranking officer in the Royal Lucian Navy, though if truth be told, my rank has more to do with my birth than anything else. When an emergency distress signal came from Sekai warning us that the Key which opens up a portal to the Agon homeward was stolen, the Malkyrion set out for the colony where the archaeological site is located. At the command of his Imperial Majesty the Emperor, we are to retrieve the Key, but when we got
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Now we’re in a standoff and this crisis is damn hot. Just this morning the hottest thing in my life was Julian August, a Royal Lucian Knight way below my rank and noble stature. Even off the ship, we are not supposed to be sleeping together—hells, I probably shouldn’t even be on this ship during a crisis like this!
AUTHOR NOTE:
- Artificial Intelligence (AI) was not and will not be used during any part of the writing on this project. I'm a writer and an artist and I have standards.
WARNING:
Lady Commander is a large epic space opera fantasy that I would like to complete, however I’m unhappy with some of the writing elements that I chose. It’s a very spicy novel and I may choose to tone down the sex, so be aware of what you’re getting into when you read this, because there are erotic scenes of a heterosexual nature. That being said, I do want to ramp up the sexy nature of the prose, particularly in character costumes and in the culture of the fantasy world. Does it make sense--of course not, but this is fantasy.
This is NOT a smut book, it is an epic space opera that has erotic scenes.
I'm also the kind of writer to throw everything and the kitchen sink into a story with massive casts of characters and constant viewpoint shifts. And I don't do a lot of hand holding for the reader, so buckle up!
I’m planning on doing some serious writing over the summer and I would like to gauge reader interest in this story. If I don’t receive much, I’ll write something else, otherwise I would like to redraft this novel, perhaps from the beginning, or maybe only key chapters and scenes, and then press onward to it’s completion.
As it is presented now, in length, I would say the novel is 10-15% complete (approximately 40,000 words, or about 100 pages.) Yes, it is planned to be a very big, epic story with a conclusive ending, but not a forever-onwards webnovel as is often the case with many stories here on Royal Road.
Please read and leave your feedback based on your interest to see more or not. I’m not looking for writer feedback, but rather READER INTEREST.
Happy reading, and I look forward to hearing from you in the comments or in my PM!
- Lawrewnce
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