short story; i want to make into a full story basically read kammi kettu story then went to bed and this story is a product of sleepytime dreams haha
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; kammiverse story
; emergence day
; Australian
; male to female
; annoyed and disappointed that the old form is gone,
; manipulated by the shady government and then by the elite for them to gain more power,
; being made to do bad things,
; getting the eir of heroes,
; reluctant villain ends up becoming the villain,
; the target of many people's ire, made to commit atrocities being trained in espionage, seduction techniques, trained in defensive style combat, leadership training, has a bomb strapped around their neck, evil guy that wants to rule uses him now her to further own agender,
; Name/(codename) changes to valentine (val),
Christ...I don't know what to really say. This story is genuinely one of the worst fanfics I've ever seen, and I ran a site dedicated to MSTing bad fanfiction for a year and a half.
I guess the cover art is nice? But, you know, it's bad form to judge a book by its cover, and this is certainly an example of that proverb in action.
A quick breakdown of why it's awful:
One star, and that's bloody generous.
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