Hi! I'm from Brazil, wrote my first book with 14 years, publish a horror story at 21, and now I'm writing LGBTA stories in English! I'm making a jungle out of my place and I have three dogs and cats!
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Official Writer from Webnovel, some books/content will be exclusive there.
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Follow me on Twitter for updates/art on the stories!
https://twitter.com/V1viCris
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And support me on https://ko-fi.com/vivicris !!
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https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4302958620?appId=10
https://tapas.io/Vivi_Mayaa
So... for many reasons I decided I'll stop posting any of my stories at scribble hubs.
Beyond only having bad feedback, there are far less readers here than in other places I post, so is not worth the trouble anymore(Stories with 4.6 stars there have 3.6 here)
But don't worry, I'll keep writing and you can still find my books in other platforms, such as webnovel and tapas (by the name of VCris)
Thank you and goodbye!
Hey, now I have a twitter where you can learn about new releases, see some art from my books, indications of BL books and sometimes pictures of my doggo (because why not right?)
Hey yo!! Last two days to buy your T-shirt!!
https://www.bonfire.com/store/writers-store/
(・ωｰ)～☆
Thank you!
I will try hard!
The first book is finally out on KOBO! Surviving the apocalypse as a vampire!
Beyond having it edit, there is an exclusive extra chapter at the end! (with 39 pages because I don’t know how to write something short haha!)
And even better… it is 66% off now! That’s right! For a week (and 2 days so it ends on a Friday) you can but it for only $1.99!
What are you waiting for? Run for it, run run! Haha…
https://www.kobo.com/br/en/ebook/surviving-the-apocalypse-as-a-vampire
Just advice is sufficient for me!
But do what you want. And thank you too!
Hey hon! So, I read your story... and you actually write pretty well, congrats! You have good pacing, well put lines and conversations, overall, is really great!
The only detail that you could watch out for is that you can connect the sentences more, for example: He opened the door. Walked to the hall. Drank some tea. OR He opens the door, walking to the hall as he drank some tea. Is just something little that happens sometimes.
Congrats! And keep the great work hon! (･ω･)b
I'm 100% sure that my novel has grammar errors, and logical errors (I guess...?)... So, I'm sorry.
Hi hon! Ow, don't worry, I had a lot of errors too when I began, hehe, but I'll make sure to read it later on! (Probably on the weekend hehe) and give you feedback, though I may warn you that I don't sugar coat much... See you soon hon! (PS. Only writing advice or story too?)
And I'm honored that you considered me to review your book hon!
Hello! My name is... Well, Leviathan! (Strange name, I know.) I'm here because I love your works! And... (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄), I want advice from my senpai!
I love your novel (my favorite is the Hell hound one, he is so cute! And a tsundere! Kyaa~~~!) *cough* (*￣▽￣)b So... I would like if you gave me some hints because I'm not very confident in my work because is my first novel...
Well, if you can't answer me, I will understand. (Probably you are writing *papapa*...) Bye!
Guys! Beautiful, amazing readers! I have a new project! It’s called:
Share the love! LGBTA
So, I was thinking these days; damn, is hard to find good BL/GL content, but once I find it I don’t have anyone to fan girl about!
I’m opening a discord channel/chat to Yaoi/Yuri fans! There we can talk, share, and ask for indications in one go! Plus I intend to have more authors/translators there in the future so they can promote their works as well!
So come join the fun!
https://discord.gg/VtxN6Bt
Obrigado Pon
(^'^)つ❤
MENTIRA KKKK tu fala portugês,menina.
E eu aqui me virando no inglês todo.
Kkkkk ai,meu coração.
Bem,espero que goste da minha 1° novel,espero que você me de umas..."dicas" por quê a minha ideia,ate que é boa,só que meu inglês não é muito bom kkk.
Bye bye pon!!
～(^0^)～
Hahaha! Ta ali no cantinho que eu sou brasileira osh, hahaha que coisa!! Mas ai sim, outra esctritora!!! Bem vinda!!!
Bem, acabei de ler, então vamos lá *estalando dedos*:
Seu inglês na maior parte está correto, em questões gramaticais ou tempo verbal, contudo há muitos erros de digitação (misspelling), o que eu também tenho no meu, por isso eu aconselho a escrever no word, utilizar a correção dele (acho que tem que instalar o inglês) e para finalizar usar um programa chamado Gramarly, ele encontra erros que o word não acha, e eles se completam muito bem (mas não é 100%)
Quanto a história ainda esta bem no começo mas parece ser interessante, eu gosto bastante de isekais com personagens não humanos, o que seria interessante é tentar introduzir mais o mundo, descrever o lugar (o que é difícil por ser em inglês), e o que eu acho mais difícil é manter uma personalidade marcante no personagem principal, pois até agora ele ainda não foi construído (normal, está no começo) mas é bom se atentar para não ficar muito genérico, introduzir um toque seu :D
Mas o mais importante, já que você está escrevendo em inglês, é não desistir. Não é fácil, tem bastante coisa para aprender, mas não perca o foco, leia bastante livros em inglês, aumente seu vocabulário, e arrase ヽ(o♡o)/
Ufa, bem, em suma é isso, haha (você que pediu hehe), e por favor não leve para o lado pessoal (≧ω≦)ゞ
Vivi-chan,can you tell me what languages you speak? And one more thing,can you read my novel? I want your opinion abou it.
I'm your fan,bye bye pon！
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Oww, thanks hon! I speak portuguese as well since I'm brazilian!
And I'll give your book a try hon!
♡(ŐωŐ人)
Ps. What about yours? I saw your native language isn't english as well... :D
Thank you for your hard work :3
Your welcome hon!! (*＞ｖ＜)ゞ*゜+
| Last Active: | Jan 13, 2021 06:59 PM |
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| Birthday: | Sep 5, 1994 |
| Gender: | Female |
| Location: | Brazil |
| Homepage: | -- |
Hi! I'm from Brazil, wrote my first book with 14 years, publish a horror story at 21, and now I'm writing LGBTA stories in English! I'm making a jungle out of my place and I have three dogs and cats!
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Official Writer from Webnovel, some books/content will be exclusive there.
*~*~*~*~**~*~*~*~*
Follow me on Twitter for updates/art on the stories!
https://twitter.com/V1viCris
۹(ÒہÓ)۶
And support me on https://ko-fi.com/vivicris !!
*~*~*~*~**~*~*~*~*
https://www.webnovel.com/profile/4302958620?appId=10
https://tapas.io/Vivi_Mayaa
| Series: | 4 |
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| Total Words: | 176,673 |
| Total Pageviews: | 364,908 |
| Reviews Received: | 3 |
| Readers: | 1,932 |
| Followers: | 70 |
