ok chapter five of tail of the clawed knight should be the start of the mc being in the story line of the 1st trails in the sky game. i feel like iv done ok setting up mcs origin, some character progression, revealing (most) of mcs planned power set and interluding some characters (with out sacrificing the story's flow or progression)
ok tail of the clawed knight is my new project. the pacing should be a lot better now and I'm hoping its easier to read. should require less background knowledge although the trials in the sky portion will be from the villeins side so same events different perspective. i am always open to constitutive feedback as part of why I'm writing these is to improve my own skill with writing by trying a slightly different style and format.
Ok im back. been thinking how to deal with Path of cold iron. short version that as a bit ambitious for my first story to post online so i'm no longer working on it. instead im starting something similar to it