And the complaint about chapters being too short?

I'll see what I can do. But I can't make too many promises.

Oh, very well, a hasty concern on my part. It's just that many online authors forget about the nuances of their characters, more so when they want to add growth or change, rather than play with that added element. 

Sounds strong and interesting plot to follow. You have tags that don't yet show up in the plot at all, I hope it doesn't get constantly unbalanced, like focusing too much on something bad, no breathers, becoming too edgy.

Thank you my friend! Yeah I like the same thing. I wanted more of the erotic touches in the stories I was reading finding some I like but I found it hard to find the ones I loved so I finally decided to write my own and here I am. I didn't know I would get such a positive. Away Thanks for reading my novel man!