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Random guy who just realized his hobby on writing

Overdrive2800 · Oct 9, 2023

What's the difference between past and the rewrite?

Rudstory · Author · Oct 10, 2023

More direct. I was stuck with last concept. Nothing change in plot, by the way. I just cut some useless part or put it to the next arc.

Rudstory · Author · Oct 10, 2023

And one more thing

1. More detailed modern weaponry 

Nydus_rush · May 18, 2023

Speaking of high tech weapons, crystal powered electromagnetic weapons, ie rail guns. 

If the crystals are so energy dense I'm pretty sure  electromagnetic weaponry becomes possible when using say C-class stones and above, and railguns are well, piercing weapons so it could be good against frontal swarms as well as large targets. And (ignoring barrel problems) it would be cheapish since ammo is literally iron rods

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Rudstory · Author · May 19, 2023

High Explosives Canister Shells for crowd control. It will exploded and spread thousands of shrapnel like anti personnel mines, or tens of 8-gauge shotgun shot at the same time.

Nydus_rush · May 19, 2023

I mean canister shells work, but they're also quite expensive. The more complicated a shell is the more expensive it becomes. That's why I suggested using solid shells with no filler, which can be mass produced cheaply by casting.

Nydus_rush · May 19, 2023

APFSDS is also overkill,  theyre made to pierce tanks from 3000m away. Let's give larger monsters benefit of the doubt and say they have a armour level of concrete bunker, you should still be able to kill them with WW2 era type shells especially if aiming for weakpoints and coming from a 120 mm gun which is WW2 artillery level

(Actually if your using sabot rounds so close you don't need the fins cuz fins are there to achieve accuracy at very long ranges, so at close range they are useless)

Rudstory · Author · May 20, 2023

That will be a good idea for Singapore- Indonesia cooperation arc on global arm industry

And the arc is literally Singapore-Indonesia cooperation lol 😂😂😂

Nydus_rush · May 17, 2023

Wait shouldn't the use of crystal  make space travel extremely easy? A super dense energy that only needs water, which can be mined from ice in space or reclaimed.

The problem with space travel and living has always been energy storage and conversion that's why hydrogen fuel is considered the best way to refuel in space, since water is abundant in space.

With the addition of crystal you skip the energy needed to convert water to hydrogen fuel, by straight up using water (+crystal) as the fuel

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Rudstory · Author · May 18, 2023

Woaaaaa, this is good idea! I will put orbital weapon in 5 arc

Spoiler

and space travel will be ending

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Nydus_rush · May 18, 2023

If you need weaknesses, I would suggest accuracy and time to hit, since a rod from God has to travel down from orbit and is practically a unguided projectile there would be some displacement from the original trajectory(unless you want to give it a supercomputer) so large swarms and ultra large creatures would be the main target, and it would miss say, small/medium groups of fast elite monsters (or could take them out with the resulting shockwave up to youclear.png)

Rudstory · Author · May 18, 2023

Tungsten road is supposed to be equiped with fire control system like fins or tail without reduce its terminal velocity 

Nydus_rush · May 19, 2023

Yeah but that massively increases costs cos the fins and electronics have to be engineered to survive re-entry, all while being packed into the small rod. Also rods would disintegrate after use so thats alot of engineering and electronics for a 1 time use weapon. Maybe a weapon for when you have surplus funds

Nydus_rush · May 14, 2023

Idk if this is a plot hole but how do monsters survive on earth if foreign beings/walkers need serum to just stay on earth, I remember  the serum replenishes mana or something, so shouldn't monsters be really weak on earth where there is very little mana

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Nydus_rush · May 14, 2023

So then do otherworld beings also have crystals? If so what happend to Diki and why does he need serum

Rudstory · Author · May 14, 2023
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arc 3 will focused on Diki's background

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Nydus_rush · May 14, 2023

What arc are we on btw

Rudstory · Author · May 14, 2023

20 chapter in every arc

Overdrive2800 · May 13, 2023

I just realized that bullhead isn't human or at least a normal one.

Overdrive2800 · May 13, 2023

Is he a genetically engineer super soldier or something, cause moving at Mach speed is insane.

Rudstory · Author · May 13, 2023
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he was an existence that originally too dangerous to be kept

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Overdrive2800 · May 13, 2023

Demigod?, cause that his feats ain't normal for a mortal.

Rudstory · Author · May 13, 2023

Arc 11 lol, almost 200 chapter to reveal his identity. long way to go. I need to translate the draft while carry on other novel

Overdrive2800 · May 13, 2023

They should have used Napalm or chemicals to blind the titanodrake rather than shooting the eyes. Also good chapters.clear.png

Rudstory · Author · May 13, 2023

Thanks bro, you're the first and the most reader I'm interact with in Scribblehub

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Nydus_rush · May 13, 2023

But the concentration of gas/chemicals needed to affect such a large creature would be huge, although I guess napalm would work because of the stickiness 

Overdrive2800 · May 13, 2023

Well chemical weapons are typical used on mass, just look at WW2/WW1 and vietnam war.

Rudstory · Author · May 13, 2023

Indeed, as bullhead said, “the mana thingy is really an easy armor plot.”

Overdrive2800 · May 11, 2023

They should use chemical weapons during for crowd controlling monsters. Also good chapters.clear.png

Rudstory · Author · May 11, 2023

They did in oldest draft. Modified AMX 13 with flamethrower. There was even a modified methane weapon that able to spread unseen fire. Unfortunately monster’ carcasses are too valuable to be destroyed like that

Overdrive2800 · May 10, 2023

Breaking News!!!clear.png

It turns out that people don't turn into sparkly EXP glitter when they are killed like in games. They bleed blood. Oh how surprising!!!

Based on Chapter 23 title and how walkers treat fantasy Natives as NPCs, and good work.clear.png

Rudstory · Author · May 10, 2023

It's gonna be scary if they indeed give exp clear.png

Overdrive2800 · May 2, 2023

I love your story.clear.png Especially since humanity managed to hold it's own against the apocolypes than getting instantly beaten by magic monsters. I hate it when manhwas shows the military being so close to the enemy when they are supposed to be calling in air support and artillery from kilometers away. Military tech should also be enhanced by magic+science, rather than relying on awakened humans hunters or some BS.

I have been looking for a concept like this for ages.

Keep up the good work.clear.png

Rudstory · Author · May 3, 2023

Thank you, your comment is giving me encourage to write

One of my difficulties in writing is language. You might find a lot of strange sentences that don't read well to native speakers. And the second is the context. I try to write military topics as realistic as possible because the military featured in most novels and movies is getting nerfed. Both in doctrine and firepower. It's just that the context has widened everywhere that the story become boring

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