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Amateur horror writer. Currently working on my first story, Missing Hearts. Hoping to get constructive criticism and my work.
Missing Hearts update.
Chapter 3 is practically done.
Really wanted to use this chapter to pick up the pace of the story.
I felt like I already spent to much time on set up, not enough time advancing the story and I wanted that to change going forward.
Thanks to those who've read or are still reading.
Keep it up! And good work as always.
Update.
Life been hectic past week and half, still writing.
Going to re-post the first chapter of Missing hearts into smaller bits for future readers.
if you have already read the first full chapter please ignore Chapter 1.1,1.2 & 1.3.
Also doing more touch ups on grammar before I post more.
I promise not to spam updates her in the future, just felt like this one was a little important.
Once again thank you to those who have taken time to read my work so far and gave feedback.
I'll still have a look, because I'm curious about the change. Keep at it, and don't rush the story. Take your time, and have fun with it.
Rin.
Will do
Not sure if people will see this, still figuring out the sight.
Given the feedback on Chapter 1 of Missing Hearts being a bit long, I'm going to start uploading future chapters into smaller bits. The chapters themselves are probably going to be long when combined together, just going to be uploading it in parts as opposed to all at once so that they are more digestible.
Working on chapter 2 as we speak, thanks to those so far that have given it a chance :)
Sincerely - Horrible-Void (me)
Will keep an eye out. From what I've observed since I started using ScribbleHub, is that many people read *alot* of stories at the same time. Thus smaller chapters, or bite size as I like to call it, can better fit them, but also those with limited time on their hands.
Reading between work, during break time, or some free time at home: smaller chapters tend to be far better digested. ^_^
Welcome to Scribble Hub,
I read your story and left you a comment. Also, my thanks for taking the time to read Biohazard: A New Nightmare. Much appreciated, so I returned the favor.
Rin.
Thanks, and no problem. Admittedly, I'm a sucker for Resident Evil .
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Amateur horror writer. Currently working on my first story, Missing Hearts. Hoping to get constructive criticism and my work.
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