nice one.. good format and settings.. the pov from the fmc is also good. try to read from this series Wisher Beware and Ecdysis..  maybe you can find some ideas and technique in your writing in there.. both series have the same author.. WB first then Ecdysis.. 

nice one.. maau ang format ug settings migo..  nice pd na nga naay pov sa fmc.. try ni nga series wisher beware ug ecdysis. basin naa ka ma kita ana maka add sa imong writing technique.. naa na dre sa scribblehub na mga series.same authot lng na.

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