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My middle name is Cornelius. If you tell anyone, I'll ...
Thanks for reading my story: The Succubus and The Maverick [LitRPG]
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I've checked all novels suggested, including yours. I am not going to review all of them, but I am giving an anonymous rating to all of them.
Thanks so much for taking a look at my work. It really means a lot. ? I'll continue to bring more stories soon!
I am going to check the NYC Noire one eventually.
That's my current ongoing novella. *^^*
Great, I hope you'll appreciate that one too them
I wouldnt mind if you do, but dont expect too much, as I said, I have improved since then a lot. That was my second book (the first one is called the machiavellian knight, and is horrible, even worse than this one), third came better, and I kept improving since then. (8 books in total).
I think it's the language thing. You have quite a few novels written in Spanish.
Thanks for the review. You are almost right, my writing needs a lot of improvement. Things change after chapter 13, but that is almost half the first book. Also it doesnt help my writing that I am not a very sentimental person (I am kind of numb to most things). The second book (after chapter 34) is a bit different, I improved a lot.
Anyway, I am sorry my story was not up to your standar, will be better next time, hope to see you aroung in the future. Good luck.
I could check later chapters, if you wish.
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