The commission process for teenage Sherry's character picture is going swimmingly. We've settled on a sketch and it's simply lovely. Now to the next step of actually making a picture out of it.
*inhaling* it was that manga image for sherry that gave ma an impression that she's an Asian character, I pictured her to be wearing kimono like Nezuko(without pink eyes) in the future with Hugo, but now thanks to you that dream is forever lost in the void,
Interesting. I don't see any Asian in her myself.
And I don't have a plan to suddenly drop Japanese culture in a Western fantasy world. I hated it at Necromance so I don't think I'm going to do it here.
I mean they can exist away from the main continent like the Akavirian continent in Elder scrolls, That is incase if you needed them to exist all of a sudden after reading something that inspires you to do as such,
Jesus Christ, a story that started like two months ago just passed this story in views.
An idea for future Hugo despair. Make Erika choose an orc over him. Hugo will have to content with Erika getting ravaged by an orc just like in his doujins.
A gentleman orc like the MC of that orc manga written by the same guy who wrote MT.
Hugo will feel like a failure for not being there when she needs him. More punishment for his act of cowardice.
The orc, of course, takes great joy in watching her grow to be a young lady with big boobs, just like her mother.
but then erika won't go on a anti-magic golem army rampage! nor conquer the continent with air ships!
One question, ForestDweller. Will this story just become despair porn, or will Hugo move forwards and grow into the character originally envisioned? Isekai parents dying is a common trope, but NTR, more death, and an empty broken MC would take this into a dark Isekai territory that abuses the characters. It has been a great story so far, but I wanna know it's going to become despair porn instead of the story of a failure growing beyond his failures and becoming the person he wanted to be.
geez watching censored eps of redo of the healer is worthless, nearly half the ep is censored in ep 2.
Wow, the next chapter is still only at 2.5k words. I thought it would already be in the 3k range.
Well writing Felicia backstory now kinda redundant because ww just finish her arc and she already get characters development, you should write her backstory in the middle of the arc right before the climax like One Piece did.
Ha, that's my original plan until @loshi1505 convinced me to change it.
i gave another suggestion besides that...
also suggested that if there wasn't a flash back during the climax, it could be better for it to be in conversation format with hugo... >_>
Imagine having an MC who saved a nearly raped girl, only to rape her himself.
Damn, I actually got a good advice. Maybe putting Felicia so early in wasn't a good move since it's too much for the readers to accept Hugo being troubled by another big thing before he can make his peace with the Magocracy.
I originally planned to have the whole arc happen after he reunites with Sherry.
But then again, this tragedy won't happen if he's with her. Maybe he'll still have his PTSD but Sherry will be there to help him out.
On the other hand, it could mean he'll overcome that PTSD earlier since
he'll need to to face the opponent he has to win against to get to Sherry.
Got an advice to show promise of Hugo growing as a person. I'm not sure how to do more of that, without just making him unrealistically brave, ignoring all the trauma he has suffered.
Ha, it's not like I can just go change all I have written 100 chapters ago.
It's been six days since I last updated, huh? Still no real desire to write.
I want to commission a picture for Sherry, but the guy isn't responding to my PM.
good question, i would think to see the pacing the anime has as opposed to it's WN/LN, or manga format. videos tend to have a little extra to that medium that's often lost in the other formats.
however the bigger question is why not? the reasoning you've had previously is gone now. so why not waste some time on something enjoyable?
that's quite the assumption. is there a basis for it? like something you noticed in the previews? because so far i think it's quite well done. and i see little reason why the quality would drop seeing how far the LN has been published. unless there's budget issues. the VA's sound fine, the animation quality is good. the only concern i can think you might have is filler, but that again seems very unlikely due to where the LN is at.
*sigh* another one star review
pffft, most ironic part of the 1star reviews, they're all based on 'the novel isn't my taste'. which in non-edgy teen speak would mean anywhere from 2star to 4star reviews normally.
kids these days i swear. *insert get off my lawn meme here*
Well, it's enough to kill my desire to write. At least for this story, since I just updated a long abandoned fanfic of mine thanks to a comment popping up out of nowhere, telling me I should update.
That's a useful review as proof that people would really rather have the usual isekai MC over whatever Hugo is.
Kinda want to have a Bakarina-like character in the story. Or at the very least, just her appearance.
Finished OMORI. Wow, just, wow.
Totally won't affect my writing for Marina in the future. Nope.
I'm just glad I got to play it before I got spoiled.
I now have a Ko-Fi page.
I don't have anything to offer for your money though. Only made it to raise funds for more artwork commissions.
@WanderingSwordNuub speaks about how he wants harem members to be well-developed.
But I can just write a story where it's a VRMMO and it's literal NPCs who fell in love with him like Overlord. Literally in their programming.
Or I could go the slave route instead, with the MC using slave spells. That's valid if the story is about a villainous hero, which is a popular trope in the isekai genre, mind you.
Loshi pretty sure he used to live in modern society,Fiora can't color his views if his past life did
This is unrelated but, Will there be any graphical map of the world?, not detailed, just to see the world, so even a MS paint would do,
sure, if he was described as having a strong opinion in the first place... but he wasn't. therefor he's operating off the things he sees with his own eyes, and hears though others experiences. fiora most certainly colored his view of the matter, regardless of it being a lighter shade then fiora's pitch black dark.
It's nowhere near complete since I'm making it as the story goes along. If you still want to look at it, then I can PM it to you.
I wonder how popular Redo of A Healer would get. That's another edgy isekai fantasy, but this time, it's filled with sex and torture.
Already see comments saying how they're looking forward to the outrage from the SJWs.
Most western isekai fans don't even care about any OEL isekai, with the swathe of translated Japanese isekai out there.
Though I say that, but I saw someone recommending one of the more popular stories on the site just the other day...
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