Hey, thanks for taking a look at JLL Act1! I'm glad that it's written well, but am sad that you didn't find the story all that gripping. I suppose that's the bane of writing fan fiction of a show 20 years old because all your questions are answered in the episodes themselves and JLL continues where those episodes end. With that in mind, what would you suggest for the first chapter?

Hey, thanks for the review of The Magus' Dominion. I appreciate the feedback a lot, as a round of edits is in the near future. The writing gets better (at least in my opinion) as it goes on if you decide to stick around for the story.