Not to sound rude or anything but can you avoid saying things like 'hot dick' and 'cute crotch'? just use dick crotch etc
well that was my first novel and at the start I wrote it like that
as the story progresses the things would get back on track
please have some patience
There seems to be a chapter missing for "The Perverted Cultivation System".
Ch106 says "part 5" while ch107 says "part 7". Also the last sentence of 106 is not the first sentence of 107, as it is with the other chapters, indicating that there's a gap in the contents between them.
just a minute I will check
fixed it.
it is the numbering problem and the content is not missing.
I just made the wrong cut and did not connect the ends
Hope you don't mind if I use your stories as inspirations to write my own. I have wanted to write exhibhionist stories for a while now
I am currently writing it in Webnovel under the name NSFWriter, You can check it out altho there is only one chapter in both of my stories write now
Well I liked that naked hero story
The perverted choice system is good
What I am asking is which novel of mine that you want to use for your story
I have read your stories with Mohini, and I wanted to borrow your system,
oh you can try no problem.
i am currently using the my system in 4 novels
tell me the name of the novel and site when you upload.
your choice system novel is good and I am looking forward to your novel with exhibitionism
Psychology tip : Internet is full of bad guys, so compared to confront them, write :
"Much appreciated if you read further than a few chapters before voting"
for summary
because they massdownvote you as retaliation (even passer-bys as they feel offended)
And no possible way to retaliate them effectively.
Reddit is even worse about it. People having fun to make your post of score neutral 0. Or downvote despite exposing the truth of flaws of a game.
PS : Good luck
Oops my bad XD i rumbled too much
Your series : https://www.scribblehub.com/series/505468/lisas-perverted-life/
i see it having had a low score and you writing in summary "if you are this fast to review then your wife might be sad in the bed because of your quick response"
Compared to joking but offending people, i simply suggested to use another sentence for it. Because your joke will just create incite their rebellious spirit to not listen.
>_o
Well not a problem as I am expecting to go through from negative side
Also I am not updating it here instead the update is in patreon
So no problem
Well thank you for your advice
I saw three stories simultaneously updated all with the word "perverted", it took me a moment to realize they were all yours. That is all, have a nice day. 
Thank you
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