Thanks for the feedback on my chapters. To some degree you are right, and the changes are not just caused by her body. I'm sorry the story felt too dark for you to continue. This story is a prototype and I plan on re-creating it in the future to clean up a lot of the mistakes. One being that "Mother" murdered Evetta, honestly that was just an oversight on my part, but thinking about it I agree; it should've been brought up. Anyway, just wanted to give my thanks for the feedback. Take care.
No problem. Sorry I couldn't read more. Mind fuckery on MC and friends tends to put me off on stories. Since the murder was never brought up again my mind went full panic mode and turned all of the lovey dovey cuteness into cruel manipulation of a vulnerable person.
No worries, just another mistake by a new author, but looking at it from your POV, I can see the mistake, clear as day. THIS, for the feedback, is exactly why I started writing on SH. To improve my writing and try to start thinking about the story from multiple different angles. Don't worry about not reading the story, hopefully, when I redo the story, you'll give it a second chance then.