Just sent you a review.  I have to say loving the story so far.  It is very engaging and while I don't know much about pokemon Coliseum, I can say that it does seem very faithful to the source material and is expertly done.  I don't have any criticism for you, I feel like I may have seen typos but they were really minor if I did see em and pointing them out feels like nitpicking which I don't plan on doing with something that you have clearly put a lot of time and effort into.

Also I can't wait to read more of this.  Is there any site you upload to more or any site that has more of this than what you have uploaded here?  I am just loving the story and want to read more.