Well, it certainly has its good and bad sides. I personally wouldnt use a example like that but tky anyway.

i think there could be some things you could enjoy or learn from them? possibly? they both have the good kind of dramatic flair you're currently missing. maybe it's just because they're weak to strong type stories? hmm, that leads me to an idea actually. what if you give your MC more folly and flaws? and show his growth as he reaps the consequences of them?

I could do that in the later books where he no longer is the MC or when I do revamp the story but since this part will end soon.

Although I say soon, that is just a feeling but I have almost everything setup. Tks anyway, I will check it out anyway.

looking forward to it! just remember this is one random guy on the internet's spitball ideas!